This was SO lovely! I caught myself just smiling at the sweetness of it so many times. Really beautiful writing, I loved it. :)

My heart feels warm :)

massive whew!

you definitely delivered on the fluff! I enjoyed reading this story.

Such a powerful chapter...written so well.

Great story. Glad that Bella and Edward found one another.

I appreciate that you let their first time be in the back seat of his car. Too many authors always write Bella as though she wants to wait for her first time because it has to be special and romantic blah blah. It's not friggin realistic, plus if you loved someone the way they love each other, who the heck cares where you bang? Great Story by the way! :D

Lol. Your author notes are hilarious.

Bang your head Bella! That's the way to do it

That was the sweetest lemon. Probably the best one I've read, now I'm concerned about you're statement of consequences *cries* love this story and these two so much

Pleas please please a future outtake ! OMG girl this make me cry so much ... but thank you it was a complete pleasure to read it

I hate how bella pushes him. He is about to go and visit his mom, thats enough stress. Why does she choose that moment to make it even worse?

Its so awesome! love it ;)

Third time reading this beautiful story never disappoints me!

i sure hope they're at least 18. And that any resulting drama from Charlie will be the good kind