| Reviews for The Mental patient |
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   tonya82moore chapter 8 . 4/4/2023 please update soon |
| 15mbrown2 chapter 5 . 1/15/2016 Awesome reference to Twilight. Great connection. Surprised that Bella still dreams of Edward |
| 15mbrown2 chapter 1 . 1/15/2016 Oh dear, and this is where things are going to get interesting. |
| jasmine.n.underwood chapter 8 . 6/5/2015 Please continue this awesome story it keeps getting better and better |
| Guest chapter 8 . 1/11/2014 write more please :) |
| nia chapter 2 . 1/8/2013 i now what a prick . |
| LoveAngel91 chapter 8 . 11/26/2009 cool |
| Jane chapter 3 . 9/18/2009 this is is really good keep on with the story i like it a lot |
| fred frm the sky chapter 4 . 6/13/2009 the word ur lookin 4 is frazzled |
| Laurel chapter 8 . 5/31/2009 Now I'm really confused. She got reincarnated? Really... what the heck? This is all really disorienting. Get a beta or revamp this or both, PLEASE. |
| Laurel chapter 7 . 5/31/2009 I am having an extremely hard time reading this and I can't hear the characters talking with all the bold/italicized writing going on. |
| Laurel chapter 6 . 5/31/2009 I have to be boring you by now... I don't think the bold/italicized speaking adds to the story. Honestly, it made it harder for me to read, and I don't even have eye problems. |
| Laurel chapter 5 . 5/31/2009 Your chapters are really short. This isn't sounding like an asylum at all... They're supposed to HELP you, right? |
| Laurel chapter 4 . 5/31/2009 Hi. This is really very like the other chapters, so I don't have much to say. Thanks for teaching me the word "fraggled". Can they really put patients in "the white room" just for telling the truth? |
| Laurel chapter 3 . 5/31/2009 Okay, there are some spelling errors here, possibly typos. Try a spell-check, or maybe just look it over closely. Also, there are some places that could use commas. Also you could describe what is going on in more detail, I can't "see" much here. |