Reviews for Chuck Versus The Road To Innocence
AgentCharlesCarmichael chapter 20 . 8/12/2010
Oh man. Just left us hanging like that? Update! Please?
AgentCharlesCarmichael chapter 18 . 8/12/2010
Oh man this chapter was awesome! I have to admit I fealt bad for Rachael though.
AgentCharlesCarmichael chapter 17 . 8/11/2010
Wow. Awesome work bro. I'm sad right now knowing that the next 3 chapters are probably going to be the last for awhile.
AgentCharlesCarmichael chapter 15 . 8/11/2010
Oh wow I loved this. Nothing like seeing two women pin for Chuck
AgentCharlesCarmichael chapter 14 . 8/11/2010
Sweetness. I love moments of jealous Sarah. And you write 'em the best Liam
Elysion1879 chapter 20 . 7/12/2010
I hope you end up finishing this off at some point, great fic so far.
PhoenixFlight72 chapter 20 . 3/3/2010
very nice so far. i like the story and the writing style. so happy chuck and sarah finally got together
LowJack69 chapter 20 . 2/26/2010
wow, great chapter, great story, just for lack of anything else to say... AWESOME!
BetweenTwoWorlds chapter 20 . 2/25/2010
Well, I have to say I got a little worried during some of the previous chapters but I'm definately glad that Chuck and Sarah seem to be doing better! I can't wait for more! The fic is well..."awesome"!
Ily18 chapter 20 . 1/29/2010
I love the triangle you've come up with! The whole Sarah/Chuck/Rachel situation has been just perfect since the very beginning, and even though I'm 100% of a Chuck/Sarah shipper, I must admit I would have liked to see the triangle alive for a couple of more chapters. But hey, at least Sarah has finally opened up with Chuck about her feelings for him, so... that's awesome! LOL

The role Ellie is playing is quite surprising, since I've never pictured her as a spy, but I'm really satisfied by your choice to let her find out the truth about Chuck and Sarah, and give her a chance to help.

One more thing about Rachel. She's absolutely a great character, I love her! She's funny, she's a badass, she has a heart and, most importantly, she likes Chuck, which drives Sarah jealous, which makes me very happy! :D

So, hopefully you're gonna update soon, right? :D Can't wait!
AngelOfDeath07 chapter 20 . 1/26/2010
Ok I just read all 20 chapters... well over two days but anyway I am loving this fic!

I cant really say what I liked about each chapter as I'll be here all day but to sum up...I love the drama firstly when Chuck got kidnapped and I actually thought that they would never find him but once again Chuck saved his own butt lol and I was suprised at first to see that he started to like Rachel but i guess I under estimated Chuck's big heart. I'm glad that this is a Charah and Rachel agreed to back off because really i cant see Chuck with anyone else :P

Oh and I like that Ellie and Devon know about Chuck and are involved, especially Ellie and the seduction she is doing with Rachel.

Update soon please

Deanie
Joe 262 chapter 20 . 1/16/2010
great chapter im glad you are continuing this story
NickyR chapter 20 . 1/15/2010
So much to like in this chapter!

First the "not it" game brought me back to being a kid.

Then rachel teaching ellie about seduction was full of comedy, who knew ellie would be so good ;)

I loved the part where sarah said look you have to be ok with this etc. for the team to work I think that is smart!

Lastly I think it will be very interesting to see the flirting with the mark, I sure hope that chuck can handle it!

Thank you for the update, will try to review to update the other new stories you got up :)
anon4utu chapter 20 . 1/14/2010
Glad that your back at it.
KittyGoddess415 chapter 20 . 1/12/2010
Yay! You're back! (waves) This was awesome as always. I can't say I'm happy to have Sarah seducing a mark, even though it's bound to happen. Rachel and Ellie were hilarious, but the absolute best?

"“Two badass secret agent hotties were fighting over me,” Chuck marveled.

“Can we get back to the point?” Sarah asked, only a bit annoyed.

“Hold on, let me have this moment. It’s one I never expected to have.”"

Dead on. Loved it! Can't wait for more!
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