Well, I don't know if you remember me, the ungrateful and displeasing little reviewer on 'Black Dwarfs, Blue River'. I was naive then, and a little envious, I admit with shame. (I recall we discussed why I had found the plotline a bit dull.) But I've grown since then. And come to truly appreciate and adore the world you've created for us to enjoy. It's with amazement that I read this story and all of the others. The settings, the characters, the worldbuilding. I know you have inspired countless writers and made this community what it is today. I failed to see it then, the hard work and time and thought you put it into your stories. They're so intricate and blended together perfectly, profounder and realer than Lewis's Narnia even. I always thought he could have expanded on life farther out of Narnia and given the world more complexity. But since, it's a children's story, I understand his intentions. But you, and so many other writers, take the gaps in the Narnian timeline as an opportunity to create something so extensive but still true to the heart of the books. It's joyful.

I am fascinated that you've been writing since 2006 and are still here. I am a young and aspiring writer and feel that I can learn a lot from you. But reading your works does make me feel intimidated. If you don't want to answer, I am sorry to have asked, but how old were you when you started for Narnia?

I cannot believe it has taken me this long to fall in love with the world you have birthed. But I have now, and I am never recovering from it.

There is so much more I want to say, but I have lack of time. So, I simply must urge you to finish the two stories you've left uncomplete for a reason I know is valid. But please, for all your readers, try to give writing some time. If you can't, it is understandable. But you've no idea what it would mean, for the entire community if you updated again. You might have seen a glimpse when you posted your last story (I have yet to reread it and review it, by the way). So, please, please, accept my humble request.

May you stay blessed. :-)

I really need the continuation of this! 2019 I still do not lose hope

Oh, PLEASE continue with this! This is wonderful so far and I would hate to see a piece like this abandoned. Although I think that you, elecktrum, will finish this eventually. Though I hope that it'll be soon. Please...

You know, sometimes reading fanfiction spoils your love for reading books. Then, you run out of fanfiction and it all is frustrating. I was very glad when I found this story yesterday, because I know you are a great writer and I hadn't read this story yet.

BUT... it's not complete and the last update was three years ago. Really. The idea is nice and the prologue was very intriguing; why did you abandon the story? Would you please consider writing and updating the next chapter, please? Say yes!

I've really enjoyed reading this. If you ever decide to continue writing this, I'll be here to read it.

I don't think I have reviewed your stories before due to the fact that I am notoriously lazy as a reviewer. I have slowly been working my way through all of your stories and have finally made my way to this one, which I saved till last because it was incomplete. Your writing is amazing and you practically made the Narnian fanfiction community what it is today. Thank you for all your work, the laughs, tears, and masterpieces you have provided. I hope to see this finished someday, but even if it is not you are still undoubtedly the greatest Narnian writer on this site and I will always read your work with a great sense of awe and gratefulness.

love it and wish you'd come back to this story!

Ohhhh I'm reading all your stories and loving them! They are all so well written and you capture the characters perfectly! I really do hope you continue on with this story! You're an amazing writer!

I am very impressed with all of your writing, and how beautifully you've expanded the Golden Age of Narnia.

This story is do beautiful...is there any hope for us that you may come back to it?

I'd like to see how Aravis takes to being 'in the background.' Or whether Cor and Corin even bother trying.

it breaks my heart that this is not complete because I'm kinda falling in love with your style of writ

Peter's oath - in your prologue - is beautiful. The Narnian sentiment of revinim, that you show throughout this story and all the rest of your writing, is also beautiful (and something I wish we saw more of in our world. Will you be continuing this story?
Thank you!

Wow, I really like your writing and how good you write the characters, also when I read this chapter and then I went and read the summary, it was like all click! I can almost imagine what is going to happen! Also I love the oath.
Well see you next chap!
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I LOVE your stories. Than universe you have created in so amazing and intresting and painfully addicting. This story is intriguing and I've been dying to see what happens next for so long now. Please, please, please update soon.