This story is utterly depressing. No redeeming characters in this one. Every character is selfish and self obsessed.

Haven't reviews fanfiction in a long time, but just wanted to let you know that in done reading this story. If Jasper was a real dom then he wouldn't have manipulated Edward like this. Poor Edward not knowing what is going on and thinking this is therapy, he needs to report jasper

now Edwards alices "brother"? I'm so confused! wasn't he just eating that skank out?

In chapter 43 jasper says that he didn't even know Edward...huh? Pretty sure he was fucking him a couple chapters ago...now what your saying it wasn't real?

now Edwards with alice too? this is getting grosser and fucking grosser.

and now their sex life involves alice too? geez...why not just have it an open relationship or better yet...no relationship...they can all just fuck anything with a whole and not worry about feelings and shit.

Seems to me that their just whores...attracted to everyone. its gross.

Now not only is Edward cheating on bella with jasper hes also watching live porn with other girls? WOW, why even have Edward and bella together at this point? If Edward is going to just go on some nasty naked fuck fest...why is he still married?

I don't get why she would want the same guy though...why would you want to fuck the same guy your husband cheated on you with? That's just fucking nasty.

Bella should either leave Edward or start using condoms with faggotward and ...I hope she never joins them. But she should find another man to be with. If Edward can fuck some dude then bella should be able to too!
I'm sure Edward would be just fine with it! Since hes making bella share him its only fair that he shares bella with another man too...and NOT THE SAME MAN! Jaspers a used up nasty fucking piece of shit.

funny how jasper says he wont disrupt Edwards marriage...but he just helped Edward cheat on his wife ...nice.

So, this Edwards a fucking piece of shit huh?

so Edwards bisexual...and is so gonna cheat on his wife with his therapist...great!

So Jasper is with Alice but he agreed to walk into that sick sex case? Does Alice know that he willingly cheated on her? OVER AND OVER AND OVER AGAIN? Cause he CHOSE to go there!

And let me guess, hes going to drag Edward and bella into that nasty shit. That's just what we all want...Edward to cheat on bella! great.

Okay so I loved this story and now I'm devastated and wish I had stopped reading at the happy chapter, but I'm soooooo ready to read the sequel and next mind fuck! I'll miss Jasper though :(

now Edwards fucking jasper AND ALICE? wow...so much for his marriage...poor bella. Edwards new life style has turned bella into a fucking whore. that's a damn shame...im just done with this pile of bullshit...everyone just fucks everyone...theres no god damn point

bella is seriously gonna let jasper fuck her with his std dick? he fucks EVERYTHING...I wouldn't take that cock...just sayin...nasty