Reviews for Dark Salvation
I'mwiththevampires08 chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
Wow, you guys are good! Was that really Jasper's ugly past? Or was he really just dreaming? And he's got a thing for Bella?

I can't wait for Edward to make his appearance! It's going to be great!

Oh, and my panties definitely got wet when Jasper had to suck off Peter. It was just so hott!
krissf chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
just thinking about the fact that we are going to have a dom edward and dom jasper at some point gets me all hot and bothered and its only the first hoo
kaia2008 chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
Already hooked on this story! Jasper's backstory is heartwrenching. And I have to say I've never been so happy to read about someone being choked... Can definitely see why a career change was in order...

Jasper seems to have things under pretty tight control now with his practice, and am wondering how Edward will effect it...

Looking forward to getting into Edward's story too. (Hoping that will be the next chapter)
flormi chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
that was an intense first chapter!

amazing, i will be looking forward your updates!
barbiedoll123 chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
man maria was something else, is bella going to be jaspers slave and edwards,good job
fiberkitty chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
I'm so happy we came up with the idea for a dark fic and actually are writing it.

I'm starting on chapter three soon!
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