Reviews for Eve, the Apple of my Eye
Mini Nicka chapter 18 . 11/20/2009
Theres a cool connection that wasn't present in the books. Loved it and am looking forward to more.
Esarosa chapter 18 . 11/20/2009
I was so excited to read this chapter, I loved it. The sense of loneliness was just pitch perfect, her guilt at what she's done..and you've introduced one of my favorite vamp characters Garrett.. very very happy and once again I can't wait to read more :D
Horsegal93 chapter 18 . 11/20/2009

haha, loved it

CallistoLexx chapter 17 . 11/1/2009
Aww, that's so sad. This story is wonderful, I'm looking forward to seeing how you get the two of them back together.
HeswamtoFrance chapter 17 . 11/1/2009
I think I'm going to cry.

Blueflowers chapter 17 . 11/1/2009

one of the most beautiful chapters I've read, bitter sweet.
xXxlizardxXx chapter 17 . 10/30/2009
ah! no! i cant believe it! i dont want her to leave! cant wait for more! keep writing!


Iceblondie chapter 17 . 10/30/2009
God I hope Carlisle doesn't let her go, why hasn't Edward said any thing to her. He must feel bad for telling her not to love and be with Carlisle, he was and is jealous.
beignet chapter 17 . 10/29/2009
so bittersweet. I am happy Carlisle told her how he felt but I wish he would sop her
Iceblondie chapter 10 . 10/29/2009
How the hell did Esme know he killed her husband. Was it an overall feeling that vampires feel or she just guessed.

Well now even though she is immortal and strong, she can feel emotionally & physically safe from her husband charles. Carlilr did this out of love and vengence for Esme, no matter the out come from either her or Edward.
Iceblondie chapter 8 . 10/29/2009
Esme is coming around and may not appear to be trusting Carlile but in some depth she is, and is now making baby steps.

It is great that she wants to make her room more to her liking, her home.

As for what her husband did to her, did he beat her or emotionally scar her to start with, may be that is why she feels even more hatred towards Carlile as a man and she thinks of Edward as a boy like the love she had for her son.
rameau chapter 17 . 10/28/2009
Is this why it's so important to talk? To speak up what's on your mind, unafraid of what it might cost you because the reward will always be greater?

I can understand Carlisle staying silent and patient, not wanting to pressure or force Esme's decision in any way. He knows how much was taken from her while she was alive and to coerce her in any way is unacceptable. It has to be her decision to stay, it has to come from her. But what is stopping him from saying what he feels? Is he afraid of saying too much and making her think he's expecting something in return? Or is he simply afraid? I'm not sure about this moment, all I know that he can be too tolerant at times. Impatience has its virtues too.

Esme? Self-loathing and doubt are powerful emotions and after being through the abuse, it's difficult to see a way out. I can understand her thinking the worst and expecting little or no support at all. Her self-worth was crushed long before the appearance of the monster within her. If words can deceive just as actions can hurt, what is there to believe in? I'm sure her husband had his softer moments too making it impossible for her to trust or rely on anything good or complimenting. Why should Carlisle be any different? After all he's actually worth the admiration and respect, why should someone so good see anything worth saving in her?

Now I'm rambling.

All this leaves is Edward. If he's aware of Esme's thoughts enough to know when she's made up her mind to leave, then he must know the truth and reasons behind that choice. Why doesn't he correct her misconceptions? Does he want things to go back to what they were before Esme or does he agree with her? Does he really think she's the reason of Carlisle's downfall? Either way he still has a lot of growing up to do.
FragileFantasy chapter 17 . 10/27/2009
So heartbreaking! But such a beautiful chapter. DON'T GO, ESME! STOP HER, CARLISLE!

You're such a brilliant writer. Absolutely amazing. I love this story so much.

Thank you for this.
Reggie Jolie chapter 17 . 10/27/2009

after I found your fic

can not stop reading .. is simply fantastic.

I wonder when we will have a new chapter?

Esme really going to stay with the Volturi?

I look forward to.
justsayno chapter 17 . 10/27/2009
gah why doesn't he just beg her to stay? this is so good!
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