Reviews for Eve, the Apple of my Eye
copperboom xXx chapter 16 . 10/6/2009
i LOVE really explains a lot and makes sense way more than the "esme is changed and everyone is happy and edward random peaces put" amazing!
Strawberry Dawn chapter 16 . 10/6/2009
Wow. So much emotion packed into this chapter! Amazeballs!
Netter86 chapter 16 . 10/6/2009
Edward is a spoiled brat. But I love bratty Edward, I love these Pre-Twilight stories I love the ideas of possible histories of all the vamps.
piccolover22 chapter 16 . 10/6/2009
poor esme and edward is being a jerk i want to kill him but aw he is dead too baD!
jvclaire chapter 15 . 10/4/2009
I AM LOVING THIS STORY! And, the pacing over the last 4 chapters has been perfect! I'm excited to see what happens next!

One question: does Carlisle know why she was going to the graveyard? Please forgive me if some reviewer already asked this...
SailorV911 chapter 15 . 9/29/2009
oh boy, this is really gonna piss edward off..
SailorV911 chapter 14 . 9/29/2009
Man, Edward really is acting like quite the child, isn't he? Lol, it's funny, guess he has always been that way. Whatever He thinks is right, MUST be because he thinks it so. lol.
SailorV911 chapter 13 . 9/29/2009
oh boy. I thought in the last chapter Edward was going to be leaving soon. Guess it will be sooner than I thought. I love how they are all growing so close to each other. You can easily see while reading this why they have such a close relationship in the book. You are doing an excellent job.
SailorV911 chapter 12 . 9/29/2009
I hate to say it, but your quote about Rosealie and Carlisle's record is not accurate. In Eclipse, pg 163, Rose says "You know, my record is almost as clean as Carlisle's. Better than Esme. A thousand times better than Edward. I've never tasted human blood." The quote states that SHE has never tasted human blood. But it doesn't really matter, it's YOUR story to tell. I love the story either way, just wanted to clear that up. Are you referring to another discussion, not the one where Rose is telling Bella her story. Not trying to be rude, simply curious if I am forgetting something. BTW, this chapter was awesome ;)
SailorV911 chapter 11 . 9/29/2009
it is cannon with bits of AU mixed in. I believe that it could have happened something like this. and for the most part it is most likely accurate.
SailorV911 chapter 10 . 9/29/2009
ok, so yeah, this chapter was a bit AU. Carlisle has never killed anyone, but I think I like this version better. To know that he would avenge Esme, no matter what makes sense. I like it.
SailorV911 chapter 9 . 9/29/2009
wow, that was pretty evil of you! I am very much enjoying this story.
SailorV911 chapter 5 . 9/29/2009
hmm, this is going to be interesting..
FragileFantasy chapter 15 . 9/26/2009
Again, an excellent chapter- and finally some romance between the two! I really do love your interpretation of this story.. I can't wait for more. I wonder what Edward's reaction will be to the news that not only does Carlisle still love Esme after what she almost did, but he kissed her!

I'm excited. ;)
HeswamtoFrance chapter 15 . 9/25/2009
Sorry it's taken so long to review, real life, sigh.

But this is fantastic. I love this chapter the way you bring in the memories of their evening together and it fading into the girl in the cemetary. Their kiss is perfect, exactly how it should be. You did wonderfully. I can not wait to read more.

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