|Reviews for Eve, the Apple of my Eye|
| ChloeNine chapter 16 . 10/7/2009
That was such a powerful chapter! I love that Edward is lashing out at Esme, that he blames her for the shift in the dynamic now, and blames her for Carlisle falling from grace in his mind. And I think that Edward knew she would go after a human again, and succeed. And that he was probably hoping for it, so that Carlisle would stop loving Esme. Your Edward is the most like a teenage boy of just about any ff I've read, even though he's a vampire. The conflict you've created is incredible!
| SailorV911 chapter 16 . 10/7/2009
oh my so sad.
| OliviaJane chapter 16 . 10/7/2009
Aye, yigh, yigh
It was inevitable. Rose did say her record better than Carlisle (in Eclipse), therefore meaning Esme's as well. So somewhere along the way Esme had succumb to her craving at some point, and this one would make perfect sense.
Okay, can Carlisle kick Edward's ass now? Can the jerk show an ounce of remorse for abandoning Esme? Maybe it's time I took matters into my own hands. lol ;)
While thoroughly angsty and heartbreaking,excellent chappie.
| ElCullen chapter 16 . 10/7/2009
Great chapter as always! Update soon!
| leo22cuervo chapter 16 . 10/7/2009
Good chapter, what will happen next? she's goign to be devastated, and what about Edward? did he really left! ... wait... don't tell me, I prefer to read it in the next chapter :D
| Ali H chapter 16 . 10/7/2009
That was so sad :( Can't wait for the next capter!
| hartfordamy chapter 16 . 10/7/2009
it was such an incredible chapter. already i am so worry about edward and i cant begin to imagine what will happen next. the way you wrote the revaltion that esme was in love with carlisle was spactacular. i am amazed!
| rameau chapter 16 . 10/7/2009
And so the guilt takes over and the self-blame begins. She takes one step forward and three back. Can Carlisle keep up with her? Esme was awakened in so many ways in this chapter. First she realised she couldn't let Edward dictate the way she lives her life just to make his easier for him and then she faces the fact that her self-control is fleeting at best, and when her mind catches up with her heart she chooses to be the monster Edward convinced her she is. Esme just lived through those moments and felt the feelings and now she has to process them and learn to accept these aspects of herself. Can't wait to see how it happens.
Edward is such a mess. Understandably but a mess still. He truly is the teenager who never got a chance to grow up and change is difficult, nearly impossible for vampires who remain unchanged through the centuries and millennia. He has to fall, from a great height and hard to divert his course. Of course we know what happens but I'm quite interested in seeing how it happens. Oh, I said that already... Better stop there because I have nothing new to say.
P.S. Rambling is good.
| TexasTank chapter 16 . 10/6/2009
This is an amazing and moving chapter. The emotion you express and the drama of this chapter betrays the fact that you are a writer of defined talent. A truly amazing chapter.
| copperboom xXx chapter 16 . 10/6/2009
i LOVE this...it really explains a lot and makes sense way more than the "esme is changed and everyone is happy and edward random peaces put" amazing!
| Strawberry Dawn chapter 16 . 10/6/2009
Wow. So much emotion packed into this chapter! Amazeballs!
| Netter86 chapter 16 . 10/6/2009
Edward is a spoiled brat. But I love bratty Edward, I love these Pre-Twilight stories I love the ideas of possible histories of all the vamps.
| piccolover22 chapter 16 . 10/6/2009
poor esme and edward is being a jerk i want to kill him but aw he is dead too baD!
| jvclaire chapter 15 . 10/4/2009
I AM LOVING THIS STORY! And, the pacing over the last 4 chapters has been perfect! I'm excited to see what happens next!
One question: does Carlisle know why she was going to the graveyard? Please forgive me if some reviewer already asked this...
| SailorV911 chapter 15 . 9/29/2009
oh boy, this is really gonna piss edward off..