|Reviews for Eve, the Apple of my Eye|
| JuleWhatev chapter 22 . 3/30/2010
This is amazing! I really loved it! And I am excited for the eplogue and it would be great if you'd do a sequel... I would love that... :)
| OliviaJane chapter 22 . 3/30/2010
Yay, Carlisle (and Edward) to the rescue! :)
Just wondering with you starting a new story(which I'm looking forward to)after this, do you have any plans to finish Lucky Charm?
Thanks for sharing. I do love your stories. :)
| justsayno chapter 22 . 3/30/2010
From the beginning I've really enjoyed reading Esme's story...this was lovely...amazing, in fact! Bravo!
| ElCullen chapter 22 . 3/30/2010
Briliant as always! I loved the ending although it's sad that it's over! I'll definitely check out your new story! Thanks for giving us this amzing story!
P.S. You are so good with pre-twilight stories! I've noticed that although there are fanfictions about Esme and Carlisle or Alice and Jasper, there aren't many about Rosalie and Emmet. Would you consider writing one in the future?
| rameau chapter 22 . 3/30/2010
As much I loved all this heightened angst in the end I'm not sure how I feel about all this "claiming". I understand that the sparkly vamps are stuck in the time and space where they were created and are slow to change and adapt, but they've also had thousands and thousands of years to come up with better solutions. What does a newborn need to know to survive and how will he or she show they follow the rules? Not everyone is claimed.
It made a pretty moment in the end though. And I agree with Trinity, Michael Sheen is simply fabulous.
| Anna of Greece chapter 22 . 3/30/2010
I loved the story. Good work
| Mini Nicka chapter 22 . 3/29/2010
A tad anti-climatic but a fantastic ending and I' can't wait for more.
| Merina Green chapter 22 . 3/29/2010
That was such a wonderful story. And it was a perfect ending.
I hope the epilogue tells what happened w/ Garrett, even though we know he's okay...I really liked your portrayal of him.
| JuleWhatev chapter 21 . 3/29/2010
I loved this chapter! Really reat and fully understandable! Esme's reaction was very well written! update soon!
| leo22cuervo chapter 20 . 3/29/2010
In a way, I understand that Esme sees how Garrett behaves, and feels that is her true nature, and curses Carlisle for making her fight that. But at the same time, it looks like she needs someone to tell her "so because you're a vampire? You are ok becoming worse than your husband? A bigger monster, by choice, than the man you loathe?" Because she only sees the good part, and deludes herself by thinking that she doesn't kill people, but she does.
And in Edward's case, he is really behaving like a very selfish prick, because even when he said the truth to Carlisle, he did it to ease his guilt, not because he wanted Esme back with them.
Good chapter, strong emotions in it, now I'm off to review the next one.
| beignet chapter 21 . 3/29/2010
I hope in the end, Garrett & Esme will be able to forge a strong never ending friendship.
| beignet chapter 20 . 3/29/2010
I am happy they are going to get Esme. I hope she doesn't decide to try & force Carlisle out of her head by getting together with Garrett.
| CallistoLexx chapter 21 . 3/28/2010
Wonderful chapter. I'm glad that Esme was able to save that girl. Maybe it will, in the long run, help her to feel not as bad about her own lapse of control.
| OliviaJane chapter 21 . 3/27/2010
No, don't go. I'm so nervous for Esme.
| OliviaJane chapter 20 . 3/27/2010
Go get momma Esme! :)