Reviews for Eve, the Apple of my Eye
Mini Nicka chapter 20 . 3/19/2010
Yay things are on their way to being right again. Looking forward to more.
ElCullen chapter 20 . 3/19/2010
You are such a great writer! I love this story! IT's sad that you will complete it obviously after Esme returns. I'd like to see Rose and Emmet too!

Anyway, please update soon!
my1edward chapter 20 . 3/19/2010
I don't really like the idea of Esme being with Garrett, but I loved the second part, Edward's POV, seeing Carlisle so bereft without Esme and particularly Edward's confession and how Carlisle reacted.
o0kittie0o chapter 19 . 3/14/2010
So far, I am really enjoying this story, I am glad you chose a less common couple to write about - Esme and Carlisle is a story I always wanted to read, and so far I am loving your version - don't give up on them!
A-SuperStar13 chapter 19 . 2/17/2010
Great chapter, I really like Garrett. He seems like such a nice guy. I hope that Esme realizes that she needs to get back to Carlise soon.

Great job.
A-SuperStar13 chapter 18 . 2/17/2010
Great job, I
Nickeyd26 chapter 19 . 2/17/2010
I liked how Garrett is willing to watch out for Esme. And it is about time that Esme figured out that Carlisle loves her. Now, how long will it take her to get back to him?
Merina Green chapter 19 . 2/17/2010
wonderful chapter. I'm glad Garrett has taken her under his wing. I wonder if they will be together, however briefly?
MFLuder42 chapter 19 . 2/16/2010
Glad to see another chapter! Very nice work. I am looking forward to reading the rest. Typically stories about anyone other than Edward and Bella haven't held my attention, but this one sure has!

Thanks for the update! :)
leo22cuervo chapter 19 . 2/15/2010
That was a very importantrevelation, Esme realized that Carlisle felt something for her. In a way she's very selfish, only thinking in her feelings, it was obvious that Carlisle loved her, and he let her go because he would do anything for her. Well, what do you know, I'm mad with Esme now :P

Let's see how this continues, her thirst is bothering me, there are no animals in the ship, will she contain the hunger, or feed of humans and betray the cause that made her leave Carlisle's side to begin with.

Nice chapter. Saludos
hartfordamy chapter 19 . 2/14/2010
my love for your story grows each day. i am so happy that you are going to continue, and each chapter is new, different, and exciting. thank you for the interesting character of garrett, and showing yuor audience how esme thinks others see her, it was a good read. i hope to read the next chapter soon :)
justsayno chapter 19 . 2/14/2010
oh i missed glad you're back to writing!
CallistoLexx chapter 19 . 2/13/2010
Amazing chapter, as always, Boo. I can't help wondering if Carlisle would be jealous, seeing Garrett interested in Esme, as I'm sure many others would be. She's beautiful both in and out. While I'm sad that the two (Esme and Carlisle) aren't together anymore, I know they will be in the future and they need to be separated to get their heads on straight.
Iceblondie chapter 19 . 2/12/2010
m Yes Garrett is a gentleman as far as being a vamp, but when he keeps saying to her we will start from the beginning, does he want to take it slow and be with Eseme at a mate, can she do that knowing her soul mate is Carlisle. Will Eseme still stay a veg Vampire. She needs to be careful not to devuldge Edwards secret especially to the volturie, she needs to not touch Aro, but I doubt she knows of his powers.
OliviaJane chapter 19 . 2/12/2010
No Esme, turn back, turn back.


I'm so nervous for her to meet the Volturi.
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