Reviews for Eve, the Apple of my Eye
Iceblondie chapter 18 . 11/21/2009
Damn I really did not htink she would have left Carlisle and Edward, well maybe for just a little bit but not to go over seas and to Voltera. I am glad Garrett is the one who found her and is able to help her. Esme still needs to be very careful. Will she still be able to stay a vegetarian once in voltera and or on the way there. I hope so. She needs to keep the ways of Carlisle and Edward, and make them proud of her, for when they do meet up again that she can feel forgiven and have that proudness upon her when she reconnects with Carlisle again.
OliviaJane chapter 18 . 11/21/2009
Phew, Garrett, I was beginning to worry there for a moment. lol
leo22cuervo chapter 18 . 11/20/2009
So our favourite nomad arrives to the scene (you know it, I know it, everyone loves Garret :P)

Nice chapter, really sad, I hope that this journey will help her learn things.

xXxlizardxXx chapter 18 . 11/20/2009
ah! that was a great chapter! but i want esme to go back home! but she has to go to italy! great story! keep writing!


ElCullen chapter 18 . 11/20/2009
Wow! That was freaking awesome! Loved it! I totally didn't see Garrett coming in the story like that! Keep up the good work!

P.S. I don't know what your plans are exactly for this story but perhaps you should consider to write all of Esme's story before and after Twilight! I certainly think you could do it without difficulty!Update soon please!
Reggie Jolie chapter 18 . 11/20/2009

Esme finally goes to Volterra ... and good for her that she eventually found a nomad, Garret ... I hope he can help her ... I really hope.

I eagerly awaited this chapter ... And loved it.

Thank you.
Nickeyd26 chapter 18 . 11/20/2009
Very good chapter. I was a little leary of this new comer, but was releived to find out it was Garrett. I liked Garrett in BD and would have loved to see more of his character. At least now Esme is with a friend. But how will she find her way back to Carlisle?
Mini Nicka chapter 18 . 11/20/2009
Theres a cool connection that wasn't present in the books. Loved it and am looking forward to more.
Esarosa chapter 18 . 11/20/2009
I was so excited to read this chapter, I loved it. The sense of loneliness was just pitch perfect, her guilt at what she's done..and you've introduced one of my favorite vamp characters Garrett.. very very happy and once again I can't wait to read more :D
Horsegal93 chapter 18 . 11/20/2009

haha, loved it

CallistoLexx chapter 17 . 11/1/2009
Aww, that's so sad. This story is wonderful, I'm looking forward to seeing how you get the two of them back together.
HeswamtoFrance chapter 17 . 11/1/2009
I think I'm going to cry.

Blueflowers chapter 17 . 11/1/2009

one of the most beautiful chapters I've read, bitter sweet.
xXxlizardxXx chapter 17 . 10/30/2009
ah! no! i cant believe it! i dont want her to leave! cant wait for more! keep writing!


Iceblondie chapter 17 . 10/30/2009
God I hope Carlisle doesn't let her go, why hasn't Edward said any thing to her. He must feel bad for telling her not to love and be with Carlisle, he was and is jealous.
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