Reviews for Eve, the Apple of my Eye
Jenarla xXx chapter 6 . 12/17/2009
Loved the bit at the end with the change of Esme into the hunting vampire. Instinct taking over and feeling the desire to kill. Beautiful bit of writing. Refreshingly simply written, you're not trying to over complicate your story but just writing it as you see it. You've pulled me in and I like the different view of Esme's new beginning.

I have to say it does remind me a lot of EliseShaw's No Longer Alone and A Coming Of Age but you have differednt twists and views which I like. Good work.

Me x
MFLuder42 chapter 18 . 12/4/2009
Very interesting story so far. I tried this out on recommendation from a different fic and I am enjoying it. I don't typically read fics about people other than Edward and Bella, so this is a change for me.

Keep up the good work and I can't wait to see what you come up with.
VanillaSlash chapter 18 . 11/28/2009
I can't get over what a sweet character Carlisle is in this fic! The chemistry between him and Esme is really impressive, as is that between he and Edward. I can only imagine how this is going to hurt Carlisle-and perhaps Edward, too, since I can't imagine Edward wanting Carlisle to be unhappy, no matter how things have been between them recently. Really amazing fic! I've never really considered the Esme/Carlisle pairing, but now I'm really on board! Really well written; keep it up!
beignet chapter 18 . 11/22/2009
I am happy Esme seems to have found someone to help her. I hope it helps lead her back to Carlisle quicker. :)
CallistoLexx chapter 18 . 11/22/2009
Another excellent chapter. In Breaking Dawn, I kind of liked Garrett. I like that you've included him. It would also explain how the covens all know one another.
FragileFantasy chapter 18 . 11/21/2009
Garrett! What a pleasant surprise! Your story keeps getting more and more fascinating. I really do love it, and I can't wait to see more.
justsayno chapter 18 . 11/21/2009
Garrett! Yes, I love him! This has always been really great...but it's getting so good now!
KristALchelle chapter 18 . 11/21/2009
That is really cool that you brought Garrett into it. I'm looking very forward to reading more. Thank you for another great chapter! ~Krista
Iceblondie chapter 18 . 11/21/2009
Damn I really did not htink she would have left Carlisle and Edward, well maybe for just a little bit but not to go over seas and to Voltera. I am glad Garrett is the one who found her and is able to help her. Esme still needs to be very careful. Will she still be able to stay a vegetarian once in voltera and or on the way there. I hope so. She needs to keep the ways of Carlisle and Edward, and make them proud of her, for when they do meet up again that she can feel forgiven and have that proudness upon her when she reconnects with Carlisle again.
OliviaJane chapter 18 . 11/21/2009
Phew, Garrett, I was beginning to worry there for a moment. lol
leo22cuervo chapter 18 . 11/20/2009
So our favourite nomad arrives to the scene (you know it, I know it, everyone loves Garret :P)

Nice chapter, really sad, I hope that this journey will help her learn things.

Saludos
xXxlizardxXx chapter 18 . 11/20/2009
ah! that was a great chapter! but i want esme to go back home! but she has to go to italy! great story! keep writing!

Liz

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ElCullen chapter 18 . 11/20/2009
Wow! That was freaking awesome! Loved it! I totally didn't see Garrett coming in the story like that! Keep up the good work!

P.S. I don't know what your plans are exactly for this story but perhaps you should consider to write all of Esme's story before and after Twilight! I certainly think you could do it without difficulty!Update soon please!
Reggie Jolie chapter 18 . 11/20/2009
hello

Esme finally goes to Volterra ... and good for her that she eventually found a nomad, Garret ... I hope he can help her ... I really hope.

I eagerly awaited this chapter ... And loved it.

Thank you.
Nickeyd26 chapter 18 . 11/20/2009
Very good chapter. I was a little leary of this new comer, but was releived to find out it was Garrett. I liked Garrett in BD and would have loved to see more of his character. At least now Esme is with a friend. But how will she find her way back to Carlisle?
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