|Reviews for New Members with a Haunted past|
| Asterisk78 chapter 2 . 1/16/2009
Oh, the drama! Very intriguing.
If I could hazard a quick suggestion...don't hit enter so often. It's very confusing. The program will take care of this for your. Only hit enter when:
1. You want to start a new paragraph.
2. There is a line of dialogue.
3. There is a line of dialogue, but the person speaking is different.
By the way, I'm voting for Stone and Outcast.
| Asterisk78 chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
Interesting idea for your story...just a marketing note, generally it's a good idea for your first chapter to be the actual story. It sucks people in more.