|Reviews for It's Okay If It's You|
| 007Draigh chapter 1 . 4/17
Ok, I admit it was pretty good, but it could have been longer. The story is great though! 4/5
| noamiimaon chapter 1 . 12/28/2014
I never pegged Ness to be manIpulatIve (If that's even the rIght word) but thIs oddly works. :3
| Jellyfish chapter 1 . 12/6/2014
Who knew a game of tag could turn into such a sexy party?
| GoodLittleGirl28 chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
Not too bad of a read :3
| iBTS chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
Holy crap, I love you. There needs to be more of these in the world.
| LordLenne chapter 1 . 12/12/2010
Oh god. That was hot, and a great use of words.
Please kill me for reading this story DX
| Dasha23 chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
God, that was hot-ish. X3 I loved it. Master HAnd will kill them for it. XD
| AlarmedMouse chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
AH THAT WAS SO CUTE! ugh... i feel like a pedifile D:
this pair is the cutest ever gosh what ever happend to the intense game of tag?
| Sparky-hime chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
Hey, what happened to tag? NOT that I'm complaining, nor is that a bad point, because the whole story was really cute! XD Well done, it was kinda funny and a good read.
| Uzumaki Ayame chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
Awesome :D you should actually make a whole story on how Ness picks on Lucas just to see how he reacts and such lol.
| Shoryuu chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
Aw that was really.. really cute.
| Seaborgium chapter 1 . 1/30/2009
*squees* very cute story! It was refreshing to read it in first person view, since most fanfics are commonly written in third person.
I really like your writing style, as well! And your choice of words.
| Arei Aoitori chapter 1 . 1/20/2009
Absolutely wonderful! Well written and adorable to say the least. Heh, weren't they playing tag like five minutes ago?
Well, anyway. I really have no complaints, great job! Hope to see more in the future.
| The Great Chicken Miasma chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
Hey, what else is there to say? Great story, great writing, and, of course, great pairing. I like how dominant, yet loving you made Ness and uke Lucas is to die for. Maybe one day, I'll make a smut between these two, like a sequel to "Steak and Eggs" or something.
Love the Chicken!