Reviews for Bad Luck has a Brightside |
---|
![]() ![]() ![]() i want that last chapter now! lol anyway this was interesting lol oh but um i was just wondering is sabaku the sand siblings last name or is that just with gaara being sabaku no gaara? anyway i lke this! and its driving me crazy what YSA means so please write next chap soon! O and it isnt yaoi but if u have time a feel like it would you please read my story? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pease continue! Sorry lol but this ..3 shot is great so far! Plus you cant leave Naruto just there! What about Sasuke? Does he like Naruto? Damn that chapter wouldv'e been amazing in Sasuke's view as well ( as well cause this chapter was amazig lol) Sorry I seriously am a fangirl at heart..ugh that's a scary thought. Anyway this was a great chapter, and you'r perception of the charecters was spot on. Can't wait for the rest Much Love RP |
![]() ![]() NO NO NO NO NO NO NO! I WANT THE LAST CHAPTER! WAHAAH! pwease? |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow wow wow! I loved it! keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() you left alot of stuff unfinished, like what about the ride to the dance? and what happend after it? also what is YSA? you should really tie those loose ends up... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Post more soon! I'm excited for more! Great job with the first part! I wonder what will happen? |
![]() ![]() ![]() AH! I missed your writing! Anywho, I love the story. I've never read a naruto fic with this pairing, but it's fantastic. Much love! Toodles! ~Keitorin |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really good. I like how you had Naruto not be a total idiot like some writers have him and have it so he's actually kinda responsible and a bit deductive, like how he noticed sasuke was nervous but at the same time had noo idea what happened after Sasuke kissed him. I can't wait to read more of this. Much Love RP |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor, poor Naruto... Great chapter! Naruto is so funny. I also liked the car you gave Naruto, seem perfect for him! Especially the colour! I really hope you'll continue with this story. I kinda enjoy Naruto's hopeless tries to get himself out of confusions (I'm really evil, nah... I guess I just know the feeling). I can't wait for the drive to the dance. Poor confused Naruto, it'll probably be embarasing for the both of them. Hopefully they'll be able to get to the dance savely... I also like the way the characters got formed in this chapter. Sasuke even got nervous in a Sasuke way. It didn't seem weird. I guess Sasuke also alsway will be an ass. I do admire his courage to just kiss Naruto! Naruto is just slow as always. I think he'll never stop being dense, but that's what makes him so funny. Jup the two of them are a good combination. Thank you for a great story so far an forgive my horrible grammar and sp... It's late! |
![]() ![]() ![]() No dont leave it there. Finish it. Its so cute :O) |
![]() ![]() THREE SHOT! THREE SHOT! XD XD -jumps around- I mean you cant just leave it like that! GASP! |
![]() ![]() ah.. i hope there is more to this! this is really good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You should definitely continue this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it. it was so freakin cute |
![]() ![]() wow that was very good. next chapter please! |