|Reviews for Return Home|
| ladygraywolf chapter 1 . 8/9/2016
didnt know she had that many people back home. So Sho's parents are her aunt and uncle in this one. why is lory pushing her to go home? does he not she is not happy there?
| Anime Vamp 12 chapter 18 . 6/2/2015
Its saids its complete but the last chapter was a preview and it is a great story a bit sad but still good and you should really finish it please
| Kaneko352 chapter 4 . 12/11/2014
...Too OOC ? No offense
| Anonymous chapter 18 . 1/11/2014
Nice story, BUT JAKE IS DEAD! HOOWWW COULD YOOOUUUU!
Moko-san (Kanae Kotonami)
That girl named Momose
And that's it.
| Nea-Nyx chapter 5 . 10/12/2013
uh,, just a small advice,
please use a beta please
and please proof read the story again before you have it posted.
oh! and watch out for your grammar too...
uh,, i'm not trying to offend but,
the story is interesting...
but your grammar and sentence construction kinda shut the appeal a little too much...
but! i think this plot is very interesting!
| drkanglwngz chapter 2 . 4/25/2012
who's Tusuragae? i was thinking Tsuruga, but thats really wrong. even for a typo...
| fanfictionaddicthelpline chapter 2 . 7/1/2011
its mogami not maogomi or whatever.
| dinorawrkelly chapter 16 . 5/1/2011
youre realllyyy good...
i have never cried or even close to cried ever when there is something sad happening...
but your story ALMOST made me BURST out crying...
i even got freaking teary... you are realllyyyy good..
its almost scary T.T
| holly-of-the-stars chapter 15 . 10/17/2010
wow i love that song so much! great choice and great chapter
| Kiad chapter 2 . 9/12/2010
I have just started reading this story and might be tempted to continue it if only you could get the characters' name right. For instance, Kyoko's last name is Mogami not Magomi. As for Ren's last name, it's Tsuruga, not Tsurage. I don't mind the grammatical errors all that much but if you write a story on a specific universe, stay true to the characters' name. It'd be a good idea to get a beta or to at least read over your chapters before posting them.
| Natsumi chapter 18 . 7/20/2010
Wow amazing. I got sad when they killed jake. What well happen to caleigh, well she ever fall in love again. Hope so. Love your story XD
| kyokoren chapter 4 . 7/2/2010
i figure i should just say it please dont be offended but these are the names
Shotaro (Sho) Fuwa
Kanae Kotonami (Moko-san)
okay im sorry the mispelling of character names annoy me. oh and im American so if you use the Japanese versions the first and last names need to switch.
| kibahina3 chapter 18 . 6/28/2010
awesome story an i will read the next one!
| Anne Estheim chapter 11 . 6/28/2010
I had never imagined ren behaving like that I like this actittude go on pleaseeeeeeeee
| Jynx chapter 18 . 6/21/2010
I loved it. Sorry for Jake, love Caleigh, and the story line. Kyoko knows that Kuu is Rens father? Reino has a soft side omg. AND KEEP BEATING UP SHO!
thankyou for reading my review. I'm finished