Reviews for James Noticed
shine lots chapter 1 . 1/29
That was AMAZING! But what - it can't be OVER! Sequel/next chapter is essential!

They have got to get together. Pretty please :)

I love this story!
LunaticV chapter 1 . 12/11/2010
Aah, how love makes us blind.. Hope they realize each other's feelings soon XD
Emerald Eyes of Flame chapter 1 . 11/30/2010


especially the whole sirius broke off in his convo when he saw remus for the 1st time

OMFG i love this :)
Person Of A Strange Origin chapter 1 . 11/20/2010
That was so cute! I love it when Remus and Sirius are together and completely oblivious at first! I hope they do realize it soon! I love the way you describe James noticing everything! It was perfect and now I feel extremely giddy. _

Person Of A Strange Origin
Miss Pessimistic chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
Ahaa Cutee!

Wish it was a two shot, but I loved it anyways.!

And I loved Jame's P.O.V

Great job!
HarryPotterResidentEvilFan chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
Wow. Good job.
xxkiirousagixx chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
I love fics were they're so OBLIVIOUS! It's adorable. They're adorable. The whole fic is adorable!
cupcakesareyummy chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
aw poor severus
Grimshaw Redford chapter 1 . 12/26/2009
Absolutely loved it!

Great use of repetition and language.

The only 'fault' I could find was that it was so good that I don't want it to end.

But it has to. Because that is what makes it wonderful.!
Sunshine Through The Storm chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
Aww so sweet!

I love it
Mih Black chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
OMG, so cute! I LOVED the way you depicted Sirius :D so beautiful... XD
5redroses chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
I like :)
LyssaLaughable chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
This was absolutely adorable.

Even though it was only implied, it was still adorable.

You could still see how much they both care.

I though this was amzing ]

Viviane Renard chapter 1 . 7/18/2009
Very cute. I love how it's all told from James' perspective, and how his storytelling "voice" keeps getting more and more exasperated at how Remus and Sirius still don't see the big picture after all that time.
TaylorMyaTaylorMya chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
nice, i like
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