Reviews for Story 1: He's not my brother!
Aurelie G chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
NcisFan1294 chapter 7 . 3/2/2009
I like it
Ziny-DiNozzo chapter 6 . 2/8/2009
this is cool, update soon
addowell chapter 6 . 1/26/2009
Please tell me that Ziva decimates the jackass. Marcus is reminding me of my ex-husband ... reminding me of why he's my EX! LOL!
superficialcynic chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
Great story with all the cliff hangers, and drama between Tony and his brother.
M E Wofford chapter 6 . 1/20/2009

She ends up with that wuss, Marcus?

Oh, ho, my pretty, you'd better have that sequel up and SOON!

Breathing heavily and scruching round face into threat mode.

(Not much of a threat...hehe)

Please post sequel soon!
krazybanana chapter 6 . 1/19/2009

Giving you an evil death threat!

Cliffhanger much?

Awesome tho... lol, tony and ziva so need 2 get together

What will the sequel be called so I can look out 4 it?
Lalelis chapter 5 . 1/19/2009
hey dont be sorry its alright That guy is a sikko ! and zivas gettng rescued yay!

keep it up
Monotufu chapter 5 . 1/19/2009
Please continue, I so don't want Ziva to die, I love her!
BB-Caskett chapter 5 . 1/19/2009
Really great chapter! I loved it! Can't wait to see whaat happens next! Please please please update soon :)
M E Wofford chapter 5 . 1/19/2009
To heck with work.


Good chapter.
Lalelis chapter 4 . 1/18/2009
so telling gibbs i like cliffies they always lead to the good stuff no hurting ziva no more
samleigh chapter 4 . 1/18/2009
Wow marcus turned into more than just a worm.

Great chapter.

Looking foward to the update.
M E Wofford chapter 4 . 1/18/2009
Good chapter.

Very intense.


More please.
Lalelis chapter 3 . 1/17/2009
OMG ur so mean u killed someone if its the bastard then ok but still u killed someone'im tellingn GIBBS !
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