Reviews for Perfect Melody
iwishiwherebellaswan chapter 1 . 7/11/2014
OMG! This is so sad. Why did Jacob have to come into it? Poor Bella. She can't have the one she truly desires. I am team Edward but I hate him for what happened in New Moon
freak99 chapter 1 . 3/16/2014
I did not expected that ending... and well Jacob should always be the best friend... not the husband...
still I would love to dream about Edward:((((
love your writing...
Suzie kessel chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
Loved it but the ending was a surprise lolz
Eddie Masen chapter 1 . 3/11/2012
good story and don't worry Bella if I had a dream like that with Edward and woke up to Jacob I'd cry too
Vanja chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
Sooo sad :(((( Realy feel for Bella here, poor her! And badass Jacob, Edward should come and save his woman! ;P
RideThatGlitterStick chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
Awww, that's such a sweet story. It's very good. :'(
Sarah chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
:O! Nooooo! I wanted the dream to be real! Good writing.
carole chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
Oh my god, that was brilliant and such a twist at the end, you really had me believing she was back with edward. Its so perfect as a one shot but part of me wants to see it continued. For a first lemon it was fantastic, you really are a great writer x
PleaseDeleteAccountPLEASE19282 chapter 1 . 5/7/2010
horrifying ending. i think i cried alittle... oh and the writing was good i guess:)
x.lizzy.x chapter 1 . 11/17/2009
oh my gosh!

that ending was amazing!

I so didn't see that coming!

great job! :D
friendsrox12 chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
okay not expecting that. very well written though
pixiekat7 chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
Awesome lemon, but damn Jacob?

Very well written & one hell of a twist!
grandsophia chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
STUPID JACOB ! DIE DIE DIE LOL !
Starrynytex chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
Aw poor Bella!

Really sweet lemon ) so romantic and loving.
Rosalie90 chapter 1 . 3/28/2009
very nice!

are u going to continue writing it?

sorry but i'm new here...what lemon is?
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