|Reviews for The Life and Death of Edward Masen|
| Kageyjay chapter 7 . 3/21
I loved your rendition of the hard beginning of Edward's new 'life'.
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/24/2017
It’s amazing but I need moat
| capitaine-awesome chapter 7 . 6/3/2010
check your end notes because you gave your readers permission to harass you if you don't post ... and that now also includes me.
I am in love with this story. Here's how I fell in love with it. Two days ago, I was supposed to finish a paper on the diplomatic relations between Iran and Austria when suddenly... *surprise* I found myself browsing
I don't really remember exactly anymore how I came across your story, it was kind of late, but I came across it and started reading it. For me, on this site there are 2 types of twi-fanfics.
Type A) People who write a story which has *Twilight* branded all over their content, but the story doesn't really have a message or deeper meaning.
Type B) People who love to write. Express their talent throughout Twilight-Fanfiction. The stories are great and the essence of the characters perfectly captured.
Guess what? This is a Type B story.
You totally get Edward, like 130%. There are writers who write about Carlisle and Edward - how it all began... and make it seem like it was easy in the beginning. -Lame! -Inaccurate!
Thank God you're not doing that or I wouldn't sit here writing this review.
You're doing a great job. Big Edward fan, therefore always happy to discuss his character or whatever.
Jeez... Let me put it this way; Anything your readers can do to help you post the next chapter?
love this story... Keep on writing! By the way, can I have a teaser 0:) please ?
| MyGreatPerhaps chapter 7 . 3/29/2010
"God doesn't reside here."
Deep. Very, deep. I LOVE it. Trying to write my own. So much better. A lot of effort put forth as I can see. Cannot wait to hear and see the rest :D
| kalejay chapter 7 . 8/10/2009
I'm going to come after you if you don't update this soon. GAH!
| The Vampire Pony chapter 7 . 7/15/2009
Chapter 8! chapter 8! Bring on chapter 8! This is the best edward fanfiction I've read (I've been searching for a good one for a while). Keep going.
| DisneyVampire chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
This is truly an amazing story! I am very impressed with your imagination and ability to put across the story! I hope you are going to continue with more chapters! I think this is one of the best stories here! I will wait for the next installment impatiently :)
| Kamaria Aislynn chapter 7 . 5/13/2009
I am liking this story so far and I love the Edward and Carlisle interaction. I am really looking forward to seeing how he develops from here on.
| rhiagracely chapter 7 . 5/6/2009
Hello! I started reading this just awhile ago and I just now finished the 7th chapter. I'm a sucker for stories about Carlisle and stories about Edward's life pre-change and just after the change, so naturally I love your story! Update soon, please, please, please!
| MonkJak58 chapter 7 . 4/29/2009
I'd like to give you crap about how long this has taken to get posted, but...you are currently on the list of my 5 most favorite people in the world!...I guess that grants you some sort of a break.
Anyway, I can't say it enough, I love this story and the way you write. The whole sunlight/suicide deal was an awesome idea, plus Edward getting to see Carlisle's failed attempts was nothing short of brilliant!
As always, looking forward to more!
| Jan-AQ chapter 7 . 4/28/2009
Scary. Poor Edward! Thanks for the update!
| Sarah chapter 7 . 4/25/2009
All is forgiven! Update again soon though! I really love this story. Its just like a piece of the story that was missing and you are filling it in for us!
I think it was a great way to show how Edward's thirst first affects him. And killing the small doe made me think of Bella. I'm guessing that was intentional? Either way, great foreshadowing!
| JustaCrush4ever chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
So sorry that this will be a real quick review, and don't get to excited, because you already know I love the story!
You are makning me feel horrible for Carlisle because Edward is being such a bratty little bugger, which is perfect! I honestly sort of can't stand Edward at all and I can't wait to see what will happen next!
Try not to take a two month hiatus next time! Lol!
| neonapple chapter 7 . 4/23/2009
Glad you updated - this was a part of the story that needed to happen - the first kill. I agree though it should have happened in the previous chapter.
I was getting worried you were abandoning this story. Keep going!
| Kari Twilight Mist chapter 7 . 4/23/2009
Aah more Bratty Edward. I love the heartbeats thing it is very deep. Yeah I've seen the movie almost 5 times now so I can relate.