Reviews for Charles vs His Destiny
knightrid3r chapter 3 . 3/14
All of your stories are very well written this one include, however I am not a fan of when Sarah is portrayed as a CIA sancioned prostitute. I always viewed Sarah as being better than that. That being said I would usually stop reading but this story is very well written I'm going to stick to it to the end.
Molotov chapter 32 . 10/12/2014
Well fuck. What an epic. A little disappointed in the ending, but only because I wanted more Charah.

What I mean is, it isn't your fault I wasn't totally thrilled with the ending - it's just personal preference.

Mad ups to you and this, brochacho. You done good.
Molotov chapter 24 . 10/12/2014
What an intense fucking chapter.
Molotov chapter 23 . 10/12/2014
Thank fuck this isn't 2009/2010, because I would punch your face for such a juicy cliffhanger.
Molotov chapter 20 . 10/12/2014
I so desperately want to see resolution to Jill and Bryce. Tossing in a plot from the show? Not so much.
Molotov chapter 17 . 10/12/2014
I figured Casey was poisoned, but I guess it was only a plot-mandated illness?
Molotov chapter 16 . 10/12/2014
I've been waiting for this chapter since the moment I started this story.
Molotov chapter 14 . 10/12/2014
Damn son. I was kinda annoyed with Chuck's jealousy over Bryce and Sarah but now I just feel bad for the bastard. The guy really needs to talk to someone about his marital issues.
Molotov chapter 11 . 10/12/2014
I'm so confused as to what happened here. Sarah got bad news? Someone died? Bryce took her home and banged her? I guess?
Molotov chapter 5 . 10/12/2014
I've read enough bad/mediocre fanfiction and I fear this going down a weird 'Chuck gets fucked over by EVERYONE but is still puppy love with Sarah' which is kinda the theme of the show, but the government has been horrible to him. Sarah threw knives at him and threatened his safety (not to mention stealing his work) and now Graham and Beckman threaten prison and torture.

These people are fucking awful to Chuck.

So I hope you handle this well ('well' meaning satisfactory to me).
NameAjibola chapter 14 . 10/3/2014
stars90 chapter 32 . 9/17/2014
Beautiful work. These characters were real, the same people we knew but with different issues shaped by different experiences. Fantastic work!
Baby Huey chapter 24 . 1/10/2014
I really wanted to hate Jill. Now I just feel sorry for her damn it
Baby Huey chapter 13 . 1/10/2014
yes! potential reason to get rid of jill
Baby Huey chapter 12 . 1/10/2014
a military man would never say Oh-eight hundred. It was drilled into our heads at basic training (boot camp) that it is ALWAYS zero eight hundred NOT oh-eight hundred or oh-eight hundred hours.
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