Oh man are we doing the whole Bryce and Sarah dating thing?
NGL - that stings a bit. :-)

Daaaamn - he married her? That’s gonna suck.

Thanks for finishing this. We all know how difficult it is to keep going once life changes and/or you hit a block. I really enjoyed the story and am sorry that you won't be doing sequels.

this os very interesting. you've written it well. i look forward to reading on. thank you

You had to have him quote Aladdin... lol

And Jill I can see that going two ways and neither are in her favor.

This has been a long and enjoyable read.
Now, some elements I really liked. Some not so much.
Overall it was a fun package.
Thanks so much for writing this.
Too bad the other books outlined in epilogue aren't posted here. I would have liked to have given them a try as well.

This has been an enjoyable read. Thanks for writing and finishing it

In the end story was good, the possible next chapters sounded great to, but I'm still toxic about Chucks marriage stretch.

I just can't hold it anymore.
First Chucks marriage has been a disaster for quite some time. He has tried to fix it and it hasn't worked. Logical choice is to end it then, but it seems he doesn't do it.
Second Hes wife cheated him with hes best friend, at least , what he decides ? He decides to forgive them it seems, he has already started to forgive Bryce. FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, DOES THIS CHUCK HAS A SPINE ? I believe i could actually go to him and con him out of everything, there is gullible and then there is retarded, this Chuck with hes marriage has gone into retarded spineless husband role.
Sorry, but had to went like plzzzzzzzzzzz.

I really dug that last line. Good job on the story.

Well at least you finished it buddy. I truly, sincerely thank you for that.

Great story. Well done! Maybe you could work on the Other books someday.

I was just rereading this and I have to say I still really enjoy this saga. Many of the characters (Jill/Bryce) come across as more tragic than anything. I also like how you managed to kill odd Carins without ever mentioning her by name ( I like Carina but nice writing of her death). I feel for your reaction to season 3 and such. I hope you will keep at writing because you are very good at it. LLAP

All of your stories are very well written this one include, however I am not a fan of when Sarah is portrayed as a CIA sancioned prostitute. I always viewed Sarah as being better than that. That being said I would usually stop reading but this story is very well written I'm going to stick to it to the end.

Well fuck. What an epic. A little disappointed in the ending, but only because I wanted more Charah.

What I mean is, it isn't your fault I wasn't totally thrilled with the ending - it's just personal preference.

Mad ups to you and this, brochacho. You done good.