What an intense fucking chapter.

Thank fuck this isn't 2009/2010, because I would punch your face for such a juicy cliffhanger.

I so desperately want to see resolution to Jill and Bryce. Tossing in a plot from the show? Not so much.

I figured Casey was poisoned, but I guess it was only a plot-mandated illness?

I've been waiting for this chapter since the moment I started this story.

Damn son. I was kinda annoyed with Chuck's jealousy over Bryce and Sarah but now I just feel bad for the bastard. The guy really needs to talk to someone about his marital issues.

I'm so confused as to what happened here. Sarah got bad news? Someone died? Bryce took her home and banged her? I guess?

I've read enough bad/mediocre fanfiction and I fear this going down a weird 'Chuck gets fucked over by EVERYONE but is still puppy love with Sarah' which is kinda the theme of the show, but the government has been horrible to him. Sarah threw knives at him and threatened his safety (not to mention stealing his work) and now Graham and Beckman threaten prison and torture.

These people are fucking awful to Chuck.

So I hope you handle this well ('well' meaning satisfactory to me).

Nice.

Beautiful work. These characters were real, the same people we knew but with different issues shaped by different experiences. Fantastic work!

I really wanted to hate Jill. Now I just feel sorry for her damn it

yes! potential reason to get rid of jill

a military man would never say Oh-eight hundred. It was drilled into our heads at basic training (boot camp) that it is ALWAYS zero eight hundred NOT oh-eight hundred or oh-eight hundred hours.

mmmmmmmm...want Jill gone so chuck can go after sarah. when?

is Jill a bad guy in this fic? I hope she is