Reviews for Dangerous Kisses
Guest chapter 5 . 1/29/2013
Hi, I'm on chapter five and I definitely do like your story, however I wanted to offer a peice of advice. I'm not criticizing, I promise. I like that your story sort of leaves the Twilight OC stereotype (you know, girl with troubled past moves to Forks and falls in love with vampire/gets imprinted on by werewolf who then proceeds to help her come to terms with said past). And let me just say that there's nothing that kills a story for me like an extremely slow pace. And that's certainly not a problem you have, the opposite in fact. I feel that your main character is moving really fast. She's known the Cullens maybe a little over a week and she's already part of the family? Anyway, that's my only little thing, so keep it up!
Guest chapter 16 . 7/26/2012
I love it. Your new character Natalie is so cute. Thanks for sharing this amazing fic.
Firefly1410 chapter 16 . 12/13/2011
OMG! I have been reading your story all the evening! I just couldn't stop myself... This was so great ! Now, I want to read the sequel so badly, but I will have to wait a little ! I'm too tired right now...

Promise! Tomorrow, you'll get another review from me !

Thank you for this amazing fiction!


Udumuhv chapter 16 . 9/25/2011
I absolutely loved it,couldn't stop before the last chapter was are too few stories about Jasper and OCs but yours is definitely one of the bests.
Ryn of Magic chapter 16 . 1/18/2011
is it over?
Pirate'Melissa chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
:D I've only read the first chapter...but I just had to say I'm from the new forest part of england. Southampton! (:
Winged and Dangerous chapter 16 . 4/24/2010
No. The fact that your going to miss writing this pair is not pathetic. Not to me at least. :) Anywho, I loved your story! It was really good! Throwing Maria in the mix was a good twist! And I'm really happy about the fact that you kept some things a mystery. (i.e. Why Maria wanted Bella. You explained it a little, but there was still mystery to it.) And I loved that you kept Bella and Edward. In most of the stories I read Bella goes bye bye, and usually I'm happy about this because I don't like Stephanie Meyer's Bella, but I'm glad you kept her in this story. And I'm glad you kept you with Edward. I liked your Bella better. And I liked how you added Natalie in. What with the whole Alice breaking up with Jasper and getting together with Jake, and the rest of the pairings from the book staying the same. And their personalities staying the same. I really liked that! : ) My favorite part is how you ended the story. I really liked how you did that, and how you worded it too! It was really good! Again, great job! : )

Loves you lots!

Kittykat! : )
Kyori-hime chapter 5 . 1/21/2010
I don't know if you know this or not but in chapter five Natalie's mother says that if she still looks sick she can't go to school the next day, but then a few lines later it's written that the next day is Sunday. Just wanted to throw that out there.
c chapter 16 . 1/19/2010
AH! it was soo good!

i loovve jasper and natalie!

soo cute

WL Chastain chapter 16 . 8/11/2009
Awesome story! I love how you didn't piddle around and kept the story moving!
Lyric Dreams chapter 16 . 7/27/2009
hi, love the story.
xxxdarkxlonleyxloverxxx chapter 16 . 6/15/2009
aw a perfect happy ending i lo-ve it!
xxxdarkxlonleyxloverxxx chapter 12 . 6/15/2009
the necklace was so pretty u have great tast.-
xxxdarkxlonleyxloverxxx chapter 9 . 6/15/2009
.god. that was awsome! i cant wait to read what happens next. and i love hw ur mind works when u write this story u must have put a lot of eferte into makeing it cause it shows with how good it is and if u didnt i realy in v u and ur writeing skills.
xxxdarkxlonleyxloverxxx chapter 8 . 6/15/2009
this oe was really good i lov how u did a cliff hanger at th end... but i also dont like it but thats normal im just glad i dont have to deal with it and i have plenty of chapters after this but im sad im half way though it cause its a relly good story and ur a really good writer. so thanxs for wrteing storys and puting them online were people can read them. )
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