Reviews for Choose Me
Anon chapter 2 . 4/10/2012
This story is really good. I loved it. Just an eennsy-weennsy bit of criticism - you put Lily Luna P. instead of Lily Evans P. as one of the characters. Lily Luna P. is Harry's daughter, Lily Evans P. is Harry's Mum. So unless James was sleeping with his granddaughter...

Seriously though (pun not intended) I love this story.
Daniyell37 chapter 1 . 9/25/2010
wait a second.. lily luna potter is Harry Potters daughter, was that a mistake or are you really pairing her with her grandfather? haha
jamcam1656 chapter 2 . 5/9/2010
That was wonderful and sooo adorable. I love it!
Adorkably Adorkable chapter 2 . 8/12/2009
that s really good. i loved that ending. keep up thae great work
meals chapter 2 . 5/26/2009
its good. :)

can you write about James leaving in the first place?
sakusyao chapter 2 . 5/17/2009
uh well i think you need change the character have written this under "Lily Luna P" whereas it should be "Lily Evans P"
Rosewood17 chapter 2 . 4/16/2009
Wonderful! You have successfully changed my opinion on post-Hogwarts fics. I might just go attempt one because that was so much fun! Rock on with your bad self!
Rosewood17 chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
This is really fun! I usually don't like fics that are post-Hogwarts, but you could be changing my mind...well done!
Hannahble chapter 2 . 3/28/2009
amazing story! i loved it
marz bani chapter 2 . 3/24/2009
oh wow nyc story!

reali cute ending n well written:)

thou wasnt lily wearing james boxers n not her knickers?

and james has hazel eyes

but keep writing!

definantly worth the read

good luck,

FireQueen618 chapter 2 . 3/2/2009
i really enjoyed this chapter!

please update soon!
unopeneddoors chapter 2 . 2/27/2009
EP that was just too cute! XD x
i moan bckwrds chapter 2 . 2/27/2009

congrats- you're my new favourite author.

consistently, your fics are wonderful.

you've got talent, don't stop.
i moan bckwrds chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
JustCallMeDollface chapter 2 . 2/13/2009
awh!cuteness. ]
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