Reviews for Desire
ReahRox chapter 19 . 7/29/2015
Well, first off, don't let Bella eat the human and can you make her get kidnapped? You are an amazing writer by the way! :)
YamiLuna chapter 19 . 2/2/2014
!Please continue writing this story!
X3X
Guest chapter 19 . 9/2/2012
NO! please please please continue this is ones of the best stories I have read.
Olivia chapter 19 . 8/20/2012
Hi your story wa great and I got really caught up and was disappointed when I saw it would not be completed. First of u can't let it get to 18 chapters and not finish it. Secondally it must be hard work so...,
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 19 . 3/5/2012
your story is awesome! Really! Keep up the great work!

Tarah xXx
midnightwriter2013 chapter 19 . 11/12/2011
I just began reading this story and when I got here and read through your story, I was amazed. It takes an incredible amount of courage and strength to get through that. It may be too late, but I think you should attempt to continue. If you don't continue on this one, you should write a fiction involving your hardships there. I think it would make for a really interesting and compelling fiction. It might also help you to cope. I know how hard it is to go trough stuff like that. If I had to suddenly give up something I love, like music for me, I would probably turn into a depressed maniac. I commend you for you strength. Think about writing a story inspired by your self because you seem to be truly amazing. Keep in there. :)
KissMeI'mScottish chapter 5 . 8/7/2011
Awww... great chappie
olives09 chapter 19 . 10/20/2010
you're really not gonna finish the story?

u cant be serious? it had a good plot line and everything!

please continue!

Bring Edward and Bella together as they should be!

:(
fanpire922 chapter 19 . 7/23/2010
have jasper stop her, then i think you should have her a jasper talk about her feeling, then make jasper instill a sense of confidence in telling edward she loves him..

Next chapter

After she talks with jasper have her go home and think about the things she need to say.

Next Chapter

Put her in school and have Tanya confront glot and make her break down and run

Next Chapter

Her mindless running takes her to the meadow where she breaks down cry about everything, have edward enter and make them admit there feeling for each other

by the way i like the plot line it is very good, please dont give up yet
Twilightfan108 chapter 19 . 5/21/2010
please make Bella and Edward be bf and gf! I need them to be!

I think you should update soon aswell.
Peaceandunity chapter 19 . 5/2/2010
update soon plz!
EverlastingMuse chapter 18 . 4/19/2010
very good!
MelanieBelikov chapter 19 . 3/29/2010
I really liked this story! But if you can't write anymore i understand. This happened to me too.

Well i really loved it and i think you sould give it a try...
Clumsy.Cutie.1017 chapter 19 . 3/21/2010
Dear Jess,

I'm not going to force you to do something you don't want to do, but I would love it if you continued the story. I loved this story and would hate to see it sit there uncompleted. Also, if you don't want to continue it, I might think about adopting it from you, if that's something you would want to do. I have one fanfic of my own, only 11 chapters I think, and it's finished, I think its.'s really lame. But, check it out and if you like my style of writing, please consider it. also, i was only twelve when i came up with the story line for that and then 13 when i re-wrote it. I will be 15 this coming october, which makes me fourteen now. I know a lot more now than i did then, So i have changed but haven't written much since then, nothing that anybody knows about. and now I'm blabbing you I'll shut up.

~Becca
Ltju chapter 19 . 3/21/2010
wow, your life should be a good story!

I only have two words.

I understand.

It's sad you're thinking about abandoning your story, but if that's best.. I think you should do it.

I'm really curious about your next story. Maybe you could upload the summary or answer my review? If I like it, I could put you on author alert D

Good Luck. Carpe Diem.

*Ltju
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