Reviews for Little secrets
x.x Gothic Alice x.x chapter 6 . 5/19/2010
Hi! I think you should continue your story. It doesn't matter if some of it is a little different from the actual manga plot.

Also, I think it's alright if you give the character a name like Yue. It's not a bad name (otherwise i wouldn't use that for my Chinese name)
kyley chapter 6 . 4/21/2010
please continue the story
ZayZay1221 chapter 6 . 3/21/2010
re done it or continue how it is but keep going and dont give up ok bye v
Yuri no Kimi chapter 6 . 11/20/2009
yes...the Dawn Venus stopped hunting them and the police were there through the whole series. Also, Misoka regained his powers on the last book I'm not sure how though...

It's not really a big mistake...besides is a fanfiction so it doesn't have to be like the real book.

Please...don't stop the story is just getting more cool...I really wanted to read the rest of the chapters so please continue...

PS: sry for killing Mitsuru and Mahiru on my fanfiction :) :P
Yuri no Kimi chapter 5 . 11/17/2009
wah! please please update it! I'm so curious on what will happen next...
Yuri no Kimi chapter 2 . 10/27/2009
cool...I really like this story and Crescent moon is one of my fav manga so I was excited reading it.

I was really impressed by your writing so...well done :)

Could you please read my story too and review? is called The Devil's Voice

Thank You...:)
xxgabigailxx chapter 3 . 10/18/2009
i'm sorry but i don't understand. what do u mean, he had something he wanted to tell her? WTF DID HE TELL HER? u need to make this stuff clearer
xxgabigailxx chapter 2 . 10/18/2009
alrighty then. first off: aqua colored hair? mitsuru does NOT have aqua colored hair! second off: you can't tell us not to think dirty about a hot guy in the shower! third off: umm...idk. it was interestingish
xxgabigailxx chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
meh, it was a lousy ending but i liked the rest. listen, i love to know what she's wearing and all but the way you describe everything she does makes the story boring. u don't need to put that kind of detail into it because your readers will assume she's wearing shoes or that she ate the food. good enough for you?
ducky dos chapter 4 . 9/4/2009
did you just up and kill the guy? he's not here anymore.
ducky chapter 3 . 9/4/2009
this chapter has too many entirees and opening of scenes. it reminds me of a dear diary type thing
KieliGirl chapter 3 . 7/16/2009
please keep writing! i really want to know who that dude who is trying to steal Mahiru is! REALLY bad!
Katniss212 chapter 3 . 6/4/2009
NO, no, I loved it! the plotline is interesting, but I think you are over-exagerating Akira's character. So Ru-ru has a fever? is that all? I wonder what will happen in the next chapter...Who was that other chick? Mit-mit's first love? (the one that gave him the towel)
Katniss212 chapter 2 . 6/3/2009
hm...not bad. She's not seriously dating this guy, is she? I can't wait for the next chapter.
xMOMOhikari chapter 2 . 3/20/2009
hey...the grammar n spelling is not important...the plot is interesting...

cant wait for the nxt episode...

pls dun giv up...continue writing ...

i will giv u my full support xD
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