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| BFFFN chapter 1 . 4/6/2005
Me and my 3 friends (Mitch, Luke and Chuck) were sitting around the
parking lot of the local pool hall, drinking beers, smoking weed, and
just plain bored out of our minds. It was already 12:30pm on a saturday
night, and we'd just blown all of our money on brew and bowling. With
nothing else to do in this small boring town, and no money to do it with,
someone came up with the bright idea to drive out to the old Ryker's farm
out by the edge of town and tip over cows for amusement. This was an old
prank we used to play as kids of about 13-14 years old. Now we were
19-20, and still tipping cows for fun.
Not much to do in a small town like Peakskill on a saturday night.
We all piled into Mitch's Mustang, and headed for the outskirts of town.
On the road up to the Ryker's farm, we killed the headlights and parked
by the fence at the end of the drive near the start of their property
line. The Ryker's farm was one of the last few fully functional farms in
our county. Most of the other residence in town gave up their old farming
ways a generation ago, when the large factories moved in and offered the
locals a steady income all year around. The Ryker's was only one of 5
farm lands left. They were 6 generations strong, and still fairly
successful with their products. They raised cows, horses, sheep,
chickens, pigs, and they bred their very own new breed of
Rottweiler-Shepard dogs. They sold them at dog shows, fairs, and other
events around town. They were known to be very vicious, very aggressive,
and very powerful dogs. To say that I was a little concerned about
running into one of them in the dark, would be an understatement.
As we climbed over the large wooden fence surrounding their land, we had
to be very quiet to keep from alerting the dogs which acted as guards
around the property. We ran across the lawn past the big house, and
headed towards the barns and open pens out around back. Luke and Chuck
were the loudest of us, making funny animal noises as we ran around in
the dark, our only light coming from the full moon and stars cast over
"Yo, over here...!" whispered Chuck, calling us to the far side of the
We ran in his direction, following the sounds of his voice as he made
funny sheep calls. We all met up at the sheep pen. There was about 15
sheep running about, frightened by our approach.
"What're we doing here?" I asked, looking around as we all gathered close
by. "I thought we were looking for cows."
"Sheep're better." smiled Chuck, deviously. "Ain't you ever heard the old
myth that sheep's ass is just like pussy?" he laughed.
"Yeah, I heard that before..." I said, recalling old stories of how some
farmers would get frustrated by their ugly over weight wives, then go out
to the pens and fuck their sheep instead. No fuss, no muss. "...but I
ain't never thought it was true. I mean... to fuck an animal... how SICK
"Not sick at all." defended Chuck, climbing into the pen. "How sick is it
to pine after the same girl since junior high, and still not get any
pussy from her 4 years later?" he said, referring to me and Julie
"Good things comes to those who wait." I answered, weakly.
"Yeh well, while your waiting... she's out banging Robert Duncan in the
back seat of his Dodge Ram." giggled Chuck, much to my dismay.
"He's just being an asshole." smiled Mitch, trying to comfort me and not
laugh in my face at the same time.
"He's just being himself." corrected Luke.
"Well, I don't know about you asswipes, but I'm inna mood for some pussy
tonight." whispered Chuck, inching closer to one of the sheep. "And I
don't feel like wasting what little bit of cash I have left on me trying
to get some stank chick drunk and then try to coax her into giving me
some when she might get pregnant AND give me herpes anyway, in one
sweep." he said, looking over his shoulder. "What're you guys gonna do?"
Luke and Mitch looked at eachother, reading eachother's faces as they
made a silent decision without even speaking. They then shrugged their
shoulders, then preceded to scale over the pen fence.
"Hey, what're you guys doing?" I asked, grabbing Mitch by the arm.
"You're not seriously thinking of getting one of those sheep
"Fuck it?" asked Mitch, finishing my sentence for me. "Relax Rick, we've
done it before." he informed me, much to my surprise. I guess he noticed
the shocked look on my face at his admission. "Really..." he added,
assuredly. "...it's no big deal."
"How...how can you say that?" I asked, unable to believe they weren't
pulling my leg. "You guys aren't really going to fuck an animal. Are
"Why not?" asked Luke, looking back at me somewhat annoyed.
"Well, first of all, because it's DISGUSTING! I mean, you're gonna stick
your dicks into an animal? How nasty is that?"
"No nastier then sticking it in one of them bar whores we be chasing
every weekend." shot Chuck, defensively. "Remember that chick Ron and
Greg fucked last summer?"
"Oh, you mean the one that gave them clap?" asked Mitch, nonchalantly.
"Yeah. They thought they were fucking some clean college freshmen, and
here she'd been getting her cunt fucked by any man who walked by her with
a hardon. She was a cum-pig."
"At least she was human. A real girl." I defended.
"We've fucked these sheep before, and never caught anything!" said Chuck,
boldly. "Ain't that right fellas?"
"That's rite." added Luke.
"It's true, Rick. We've done it a couple of times already, and all I got
was my rocks off. You should try it before you knock it." Mitch said,
sincerely. "At least watch US do it before you decide it's nasty and
disgusting. And if you don't like it, then you don't have to. Deal?"
I thought about it for a minute. The thought of watching my 3 buddies
fuck a sheep sounded too weird for words, but if they were actually
willing to do it, I was willing to watch. Especially since I didn't have
guarantee to do anything in return.
"Deal." I said, thinking it might be funny to see.
With that he climbed up over the fence and down into the pen with our
friends. I watched from the sidelines as the 3 of them singled out one
sheep, cornering her from the rest of the heard as they grabbed hold of
her wool and dragged her over to where I was standing.
It was funny seeing the 3 of them struggle with her. She fought hard as
they tried to hold her in place, breathing hard from exertion as they
prepared to take turns on her.
"You need to get down here and see this." Chuck said to me, bending
behind the sheep as he checked her out.
Mitch and Luke held her strong on each side of her trembling body.
"You guys can't be serious." I said, still unable to fathom they weren't
Chuck pushed 2 fingers inside her.
"How's it feel?" asked Luke, looking back at the action.
"Like Julie Anderson's hot cunt." he smiled in response.
I looked at him angrily as he stood up and began to undo his pants. I
could see the large bulge tenting out the crotch of his jeans as he
unbuckled and unzipped, then pushed them down around his ankles in one
move. Then he grabbed hold of his 8inch cock, and shoved it forcefully up
into the poor sheep's unsuspecting cunt.
She screamed aloud like a raped woman. Chuck held himself all the way up
inside her, laughing as her cunt contracted and trembled on the full
length of his erection.
"O yeh..." he moaned, grabbing two fist fulls of sheep butt as he
began to fuck her hard and deep.
Luke and Mitch held onto her, keeping her in place as Chuck took to
fucking her from behind. I watched with wide eyes as one of my closest
friends fucked this poor animal with powerful, punishing blows that
surely would have caused any human women to cry for the police.
I felt sorry for the poor animal as she screamed after every thrust into
her shocked cunt. Chuck bragged about how "hot and wet" she was inside,
claiming that ole "Julie" (as HE called her) had some of the "best pussy"
he'd ever had the pleasure to sink his dick into.
My friends Mitch and Luke cheered him on, encouraging him to "fuck her
harder", as they eagerly awaited their turns. I found myself climbing
down into the pen with them for a closer look. I watched has Chuck's hips
and pelvis pumped into the sheep's woolly backside, driving his rigid
tool through her in single slices. I could see his cock running through
her, her dark cunt lips swallowing up his manhood completely as he pumped
into her full throttle.
"UHH!" he groaned, feeling his cock thicken and his balls tighten as he
got closer to cumming.
"Hurry up...!" encouraged Luke, looking around to make sure the coast was
I was completely fascinated watching my friend fuck. I took notice as his
pace quickened. Vein's began to pop out of his neck as he became more
labored, fucking the sheep with harder and harder thrusts.
"AH!" screamed Chuck, feeling his balls contract as he
started to dump an entire load of semen into her. "OH SHIT! OH DAMN! OH
FUCK!" he continued, losing himself in orgasm.
The other 2 guys both laughed as Chuck emptied himself in her. He held
himself deep, his body jerking wildly as he came down from his high, his
cock twitching off inside her as it spit out the last of his juice.
"I'm next!" called Luke, already unzipping as Chuck pulled out, his cock
still glistening from the juicy cunt her just fucked.
He and Luke changed places as Chuck pulled up his pants while Luke aimed
his 6incher up to the sheep's pussy lips and shoved in. The path was
already dug and loaded by Chuck's cock, so Luke had no problem getting
inside. He too moaned when he bottomed out, his balls slapping into the
sheep's abdomen as he began to fuck her. His pace wasn't anywhere near as
frightful as Chuck's, but his steady in and out rhythm was sure to get
him off in record time.
"You need to come get in on this, Rick." said Chuck, holding the sheep in
place for Luke. "It's better then any pussy you've ever had, believe me.
All the pussy you need, minus the periods and pregnancy."
"Ever had your dick in a girl with a condom?" asked Mitch, looking up
from the action.
"No." I answered, not having had too many girls anyway.
"You don't know what you're missing." smiled Mitch. "Best feeling in the
world is feeling your dick sink ball deep into some unprotected cunt.
Feeling it swallow up your entire cock in nothing but wet warmth... it's
like dying and going straight to heaven, man."
"But this here's the next best thing." offered Chuck. "You can sink in
and fuck this bitch right here, and she won't complain about you cumming
too fast, or not eating her pussy first, or not calling her back the next
day, or her stalking you, asking you if you LOVE HER? You just shove in,
dump your load in her and move on. What more could you want?"
"This is crazy." I said, starting to feel effected.
Luke was humping the girl pretty good, holding onto her woolly ass as he
pushed in and out of her faster. He had a serious look on his face, as he
ignored our conversation and concentrated on the task at hand. His hips
worked back and forth as he drove his cock inside. The sheep wasn't
crying as much as before, perhaps now used to the dicks in her cunt. She
simply stood put as Luke rammed her until he started to shout
profanities. I could see his facial expression change just as he gasped,
and came in her drenched cunt in a series of hard spurts.
"Oh shit!" he yelled, pulling his cock out and stuffing it back into his
pants after cumming a full load in her backside.. "That was the best fuck
"That was your ONLY fuck, ever." joked Mitch, as he changed places with
I watched wide eyed as Mitch pulled down his pants, exposing his lengthy
tool. It looked to be close to about 7inches long, fully hard and ready
for a fuck. He stepped up behind the girl, aimed his cock, then slid into
her deeply. The sheep merely moaned, having had 2 cocks open her up
already. He pushed in through the cum loads of his friends, feeling the
sheep's cunt shape to the contours of his shaft.
"O man, Rick. You NEED to try this shit out, man." he
moaned, leaning into her as he began to work her over.
We all watched as Mitch started to move around inside her, jamming and
jabbing his cock in her cunt as he moved in and out and enjoyed the feel
of her warmth surrounding him. Watching my friends take turns fucking
this poor beast was really making me horny in a weird way to fuck her
also. My cock was like a block of steel in my pants. At first I thought
they were playing, joking about actually fucking a farm animal. But
watching their cocks slide in and out of the sheep bareback, made me
awfully eager to try. I've never fucked a female without a condom. To
feel the wetness of an actual pussy on my dick (even one not human) would
be a definite thrill. And it wasn't like I'd be the only one doing it, my
3 friends had gone before, so it wasn't like they could say anything
about me doing it. Hell, who could they tell without telling on
themselves also? And we didn't have to worry about the bitch getting
pregnant, or telling the cops about what we did. It was all just pure
innocent fun. Who were we hurting? Certainly not the sheep. I mean, it
wasn't like she had FEELINGS or anything, right? I mean, not like a REAL
girl would, right?
Meanwhile Mitch was fucking the sheep with harder strokes, making her
whimper from the impact of his hips as he slammed into her. The feel of
her cummy cunt was driving him crazy, causing him to hump her madly. I
watched his cock sliding through her, slicing into her slit as he pumped
into her with a driving force. Everytime his cock came out of her, the
shaft would be soaked in cum. Gobs of the stuff clung to it, making it
move inside of her easier.
I couldn't believe the pounding this sheep was taking. She stood her
ground under the pressure of the human assault her genitalia was getting.
She took cock after cock as if it were the most natural, most normal
thing to do. I wondered if this was this sheep's first human-animal fuck
experience, or was she the repeated victim of many attacks? Were the farm
hands and owners of this ranch fucking her on a regular basis, or was our
attack an isolated affair for her? Either way, she seemed to be taking it
in stride. She wasn't screaming anymore, like she was apon the first
assault. Now she simply took the fucking administered to her, as if she
knew and accepted her fate while the other sheep looked on in fear and
"Oh shit..." Mitch groaned, his cock swelling like a blow fish as his
hips made smacking noises against the sheep's wet abdomen. "...I'm
gonna...I'm gonna...CUM...!" he gasped, losing a hefty load inside the
Any girl on the receiving end of his spitting cock would definitely have
been impregnated at that point. Mitch ground his spurting cock around in
her cunt, making sure he fed her all he had to offer. The sheep merely
groaned an animal like moan, and accepted his gift.
Mitch looked completely drained as he pulled his spent cock free of the
sucking hole that housed his pulsating piece. He and the other guys
looked at me, wondering if I was going to be a part of the fraternity.
"Well Rick, what's the deal?" Mitch asked, stepping aside to give me a
shot at the sheep's cunt.
I took a moment to weigh my options, then decided "what the hell" and
pulled open my zipper.
"ALRIGHT!" laughed Mitch, giving me advice as I guided my dick into the
I groaned as I felt my cock sliding through his cum, the hot wet feeling
incased my cock in slick heat as my balls came up and kissed the sheep's
soggy cunt lips. Semen dripped out easily around the base of my cock as I
ground my staff around in her packed gut. The sensation sent tingles
through the entire shaft of my rod, making my cock shoot off inside her.
"OHH...UHH...UHH...UH!" I groaned, cumming in her cunt the
moment I felt he engulf me.
"Damn...Rick's got a hair trigger!" laughed Luke, making fun of me.
"It's his first time in raw pussy!" said Chuck, watching me nut off.
"Cocks always shoot fast the first time they feels raw cunt."
"Right." agreed Mitch, smiling at my embarrassment. "Keep going. I know
your dick's not soft yet. Give the bitch a real work out!" he encouraged
as I slowly started to move in and out.
The guys continued to hold "Julie" in place for me as I fucked her, my
cock already replenished and ready for a lengthy fuck. They watched as I
moved my way through her, jamming my cock in where theirs had already
gone. "Julie's" cunt felt like bathing my cock in a bowl of warm pudding,
she molded to the very shape of my dick, sucking and caressing it as if
it hadn't just shot a ton of cum cream inside her.
Mitch and the other shouted out encouragement, spurring me on to fuck her
harder, dick her deeper, and slam her rougher. I was fucking that poor
sheep like I never had any girl I'd ever fucked. She wasn't human, so I
didn't have to worry about being gentle. I didn't have to worry about
would she like me, or let me do it to her again in the future. I could
fuck her as hard, deep, long or rough as I wanted. I could fuck her, pull
out and rest, then fuck her some more if I wanted. I could cum in her,
fuck her again and cum again, and again, and again if I wanted. And there
was nothing she could do to stop me. Noone she could call to to save her.
Her cunt was mine, to fuck and cum in as I saw fit. She was my slave, and
I was her master, to do with as I pleased.
The sudden thrill of dominance and power overwhelmed me. I miscalculated
my fuck thrusts, and came inside the woolly beast well before I expected
to have, having cum once already. Mitch and the others laughed at me out
loud, saying that I must have really needed that fuck to have cum twice
so soon. Just as I was finishing my orgasm, we heard the far off sound of
"Oh SHIT!" Luke said, pointing up at the house as the light to the front
porch came on.
| Concealed chapter 1 . 7/27/2004
OMG, OMG, OMG! That was so sweet! And I loved the way you described the kiss! So cute!
| CluelessKelly chapter 1 . 6/26/2003
Oh wow *sighs* and they all lived happily ever after *stares at the computer screen and then..ah, lands on the floor having fallen off her chair like the stupid person she is*
Oh sorry, i didnt realise i was really here. Oh well, anyway very good, especially the kiss, hey would you mind giving me some tips on how to write kissing scenes, just email me,
Thanks in advance
| erika chapter 1 . 5/6/2002
| Aria Nereid Fassa chapter 1 . 3/20/2002
this fic is so wonderful, and i'm not just saying that bcause the thought had also occurred to me that "Hopelessly Addicted" makes a terrific R/H song. :)
to L. Morningstar & Pokey, Ron's birthday is March 1st and Hermione's is September 19th, JKR said this in one of the chats she did.
Del a.k.a. Aria-chana
| Ev chapter 1 . 3/7/2002
Excellent lil' piece of work...short n' sweet! kudos! 0
| Megz chapter 1 . 12/30/2001
Pretty good story! I'm also always glad to meet
another Corrs fan. (Aren't they the best?)
Keep it up! (maybe you could write one using
Breathless? Just a thought) _M
| Flipacoin chapter 1 . 12/28/2001
Love this story!
| SilverChocolate chapter 1 . 12/27/2001
love it, love it, love it! Sweet!
| Poo7667676 chapter 1 . 12/26/2001
*looks around* I've never tried actually replying to my own stories, but I just read pokey's post. :P
Actually, in book 2, they said Hermione's birfday was in September. I think. :P
Oh, and a big, spiffy thanks to everyone who commented! *huggles*
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/25/2001
MORE!I LOVED IT!
| pokey chapter 1 . 12/22/2001
That was so sweet, and makes me wonder when his birthday really is. I mean, they all send Harry gifts but the books never mention any one else birthday, do they?
| Palin chapter 1 . 12/21/2001
That was VERY good! Congratulations, I really like the way Ron and Mione treats each other
| TristaSetsuna chapter 1 . 12/20/2001
yesssssssssss! who is now in a good mood? i am! That was utterly fantastic and I loved it! I love you! i love ron and hermione! i can't wait til they hook up in the 6th book and are making out in a closet when dumbledore finds them...
| Homestretch chapter 1 . 12/15/2001
wow! That was adorable!