|Reviews for Final Fantasy Versus XIII: Fortis|
| o0ForeverFantasy0o chapter 81 . 11/29/2013
Hello there :) I hope you're doing well. I was just wondering when the next update for this story will be, if there will be one at all. I really wish for you to continue! This is such an amazing story. So much time and effort has been put into this and it'd be a shame if Noct and Elia never got their happily ever after. I hope to hear from you soon! :)
| Guest chapter 81 . 10/17/2013
HI , WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE THE OTHER CHAPTER . WAITING FOR A LONG TIME NOW
| NIMECJ chapter 36 . 9/4/2013
go alia this is my third time read it again..im just want to comment go elia but i think elia lose..im done reading in this story and just commenting..XD
| NIMECJ chapter 81 . 8/28/2013
WHEN DO YOU WANT TO CONTINUE I WAS CURIOUS.I'M JUST A FAN OF YOU I HOPE YOU'RE FINE... I HOPE YOU WOULD CONTINUE THIS.
| Daphne C chapter 80 . 7/21/2013
I remember reading this story years ago, probably around 2010 or 2011. It was great and I only recently found this again. However my only unhappiness is that there are very very small and slow updates. I understand that life can be busy but I do agree with the others that you should end this story. It is MAJORLY dragging on and there are already SO many chapters. You're twenty some chapters away from reaching one-hundred and at the updating rate, it could take another few years to finish Fortis.
Also, the whole 'Fine, fine' thing is a bit common. With Elia and Noctis not in the best of terms right now it could take another few chapters for them to make up yada yada...dragging on some more...and then more chapters of whatever else.
Best to you.
| animagirl chapter 81 . 6/16/2013
You haven't updated in Forever!
| One fan chapter 81 . 5/9/2013
Ah, it's good to know you're okay. But I do have to agree with some of the reviewers here. If it takes so long to update why not give them their happily ever after already? Then when you have time you can do an after story of their life?
| Catlover chapter 32 . 5/9/2013
Why the fuck does she even cry? She's such a weak character. So what if Noctis was with Sera? Doesn't matter if she loves him and what not. This love is worst than Twilight.
| Reader chapter 32 . 5/9/2013
Aww sad that she cried.
| rheya201 chapter 81 . 3/8/2013
Good luck on ur majors!
Just wondering, do you get your stories beta-ed? It would help get rid of a few typos and stuff I've noticed in ur work - nothing major :)
Hoping you update soon,
| AnimeWolfGirl16 chapter 80 . 2/12/2013
I can't wait for the next update! I love this fanfiction and the way you write it is so perfect! Sorry for not reviewing for all of the other chapters but I wanted to catch up to the lastest chapter before reviewing.
| LadyDeath09 chapter 30 . 1/12/2013
Wow, myles gave noctis good advice about love. The story is great, i luv it, noctis must tell elia his feelings.
| TodaysNut chapter 81 . 1/4/2013
Thank God! I honestly thought you were not going to continue it! I was pretty close in bawling my eyes out when you Finally decided to give us some kind of news (and the good ones! :D), really glad that youre gonna update!... Hope ya had a nice Christmas and New Year celebrations!
| o0ForeverFantasy0o chapter 80 . 12/27/2012
Yay! Finally all caught up! I'm not going to leave a heartfelt review until I have finished this installment of the Fortis phenomenon XD That sounded really professional :D Anyway, I am curious to see how Elia will react to being tampered with by the ministers... I love how you made Felix react to Myle's being Elia's 'Dad' XD That was hilarious to picture :P Well, this is the first time I'm saying this for this story: Update soon! I can't wait to see how Fortis ends! (And hopefully the beginning of part 2 :3)
| o0ForeverFantasy0o chapter 78 . 12/27/2012
Well, First, let me say I looked up the 'Let me be your armor' song and I was truly surprised by how it reminded me of Noctis and Elia! Especially with the 'Let me take the blows meant for you' and the 'light through the darkest night' (Since he's Light of the Night Sky) :) Any more songs that will remind me of this awesome pairing?
Okay, now about the chapter. My jaw dropped when Elia said she hated Nocts! I was like WTH! But of course, Noctis is too hard to resist- especially all smexy with that motorcycle of his. :3 I liked picturing Noctis in pajamas though XD I found that quite humorous :D Laus needs to shut up! We already have Sera to deal with and I honestly can't wait for Noctis to embarrass the hell out of him and put him in his place!