You're killing me! *sighs dramatically* How much longer will you put me through this torture? When will they kiss? I need them to kiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiss!

You write so well and the plot seems really interesting... But I feel there are so much text that hasn't really a point to the story, but rather to fill inn the pages... It gets kind of boring and I have skippet over some parts but I think I need to just stop... I am sorry to say it anf i don't mean anything bad saying this, but it just moved too slowly for my taste...

Again, you really are a good writer. I like all the tiny details you put, the descriptions, the tension... I can't believe i delayed reading your story for so long !

Hi ! I really, really like your writing style :) this first chapter is really intriguing,,the characters are well defined. I' really eager to read the next chapters !

Wow, this story was just amazing. I could not stop reading it. Great job!

Truly amazing story..im still not forgiving his parents though...anyway thank you for writing!love xx

Love this story. This chapter was great!

So beautifully written. Thank you so much.

I know this chapters pretty old, but I thought you might like to know that there's an inconsistency with the meeting times; you change from full to new moon. I love this story, and I'm on my second read through! Good work!

Heyyyy, not sure if you check this fanfic whenever you get a review or whatever as it was completed years ago but I just wanted to say that I loved how you mentioned Fiji as I am from there. Thanks for that. Besides that, its a really good story, has a nice plot.

Thank you for sharing such a wonderful story with us all. I enjoyed it very much.

I was actually starting to like this story until Chapter Eight. The dialogue in this entire chapter lacked all and any personality from the characters; Hermione and her parents, Hermione and Ginny, then Hermione and Draco! No personality throughout. It was disappointing too, as it was clear you were at least a decent writer from your writing style. Very disappointing...

After reading We Learned the Sea, I couldn't wait to dive into another one of your exceptional stories. That being said, Heavy Lies the Crown was terrific! First of all, you made me like Ginny. That NEVER happens. I really enjoyed all the twists and turns of this story, even though at some points, Hermione's insecurity madee want to tear my hair out. I loved this! Great job! And congrats on the baby girl!

I enjoyed the first chapter and look forward to reading your story. :)

My immature "that's what she said" sense of humor would not allow me to let this go unmentioned:

"thrilling at the feel of the wood in his hands"

Heh.

Just a couple of corrections:
- it is Lestrange, not Lastrange
- and Volkswagen, not Volkswagen
Spellings of nouns are especially important. ;)