| Reviews for Heavy Lies the Crown |
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   mcal chapter 17 . 3/18/2019 GAHHHHH! THESE TWOOOO! What are you doing to my heart? Excellent. So excellent |
| mcal chapter 16 . 3/18/2019 Perfection! Simply perfection |
| mcal chapter 15 . 3/18/2019 Love Love Loooooooovvvveeeeee! Thank you so much |
| mcal chapter 14 . 3/18/2019 Oh for the love of it all, kissssssssssss! You’re halfway in love with each other already! Well done :) |
| mcal chapter 13 . 3/18/2019 The ache and annnngggggssssttttttt! I’m just undone! |
| mcal chapter 12 . 3/18/2019 My aching heart, hold on hermione! Just hang in there! |
| mcal chapter 11 . 3/18/2019 the tension and heat. The suspense and mystery. It’s all brilliant |
| mcal chapter 10 . 3/18/2019 Adore and ache over every last word! |
| mcal chapter 9 . 3/18/2019 Ohhhhh, my heart just swells at Ron, here: “Please, just accept this, and don't make this harder on me." He stopped where he was and met Hermione's pleading gaze. His face softened and he went to her side. "Oh, Hermione. I don't want to be difficult. I made a right mess of things once, and … well, I won't do it again. I … I trust you, and I'll be civil, and I'll try to understand." "Oh, Ron!" She threw her arms around him and hugged him tightly. "Thank you," she whispered.” —he’s learned after all! The date! The book, the article and picture, the kids and Harry, I’m just a puddle! Thank you for sharing this story |
| mcal chapter 8 . 3/18/2019 ANDINSM BREATHLESS IN THE WAKE OF THIS SIZZLING AND SMOLDERING CHAPTER! Love it! |
| mcal chapter 7 . 3/18/2019 EEEEEEPPPPPP! The palpable tension between them even now, I’m just aching for the second half of this story already! “Draco's face relaxed into the most transforming smile she'd seen him display. The previous smiles she had seen were genuine, but they also showed signs of weariness, of being unable to fully let himself be happy about something. Now, though, she was struck by how good-looking he could be.” —I completely died here...and I’m already ready for Carrie to be dumped... sigh. Love this! |
| mcal chapter 6 . 3/18/2019 I don’t know why, but I especially love this exchange between Hermione and Blaise: “Oh. Right." He retracted his arm, unable to make eye contact with her. "Sometimes I forget you're muggle-born." "It's okay. Sometimes I do too." The admission was surprising at first, but the sensation didn't last but for a second. She'd been in the wizarding world for over half of her life; it should feel perfectly natural.” —and let’s not overlook all the work with the volcanic dirt samples Draco and Goyle have gone through... Gaaawwwwssshhh, your writing is just excellent. Thank you for sharing this story |
| mcal chapter 5 . 3/18/2019 These chapters are so full of incredible scenes and emotions, I hardly know where to begin to tell you what I love first, I just adore it all. |
| mcal chapter 4 . 3/18/2019 Ahhhhhhhh! “Draco felt himself relax for the first time all evening. He had a plan; or, rather, a plan before the actual plan could take place. Step one: recruit Hermione Granger. Step two: come up with a plan. He chuckled at his list and ran a hand through his hair.” — A man with a plan! Yayyyyyy! Here we go |
| mcal chapter 3 . 3/18/2019 Ohhhhh! Mmmmmyyyyyyyy! The plot thickens and all these dynamics: Draco, his family, the business, hermione, Charlie, Harry, Pansy... Gosh,OMG! “She quirked an eyebrow. "You spun around on your broom to fake the other person out. Then dodged the other two between you and the goal. Scored. I saw it." He hated the swell of pride that bubbled in him at the knowledge that she had paid special attention to him, if only for a moment. Juvenile, it was. He reminded himself that she'd probably seen all of Charlie's moves, good or not.” — I’m in love with it all over again |