Reviews for Heavy Lies the Crown |
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Cali Dreamweaver chapter 20 . 2/21/2019 Ron! Geez, his timing is impeccable. |
Cali Dreamweaver chapter 18 . 2/21/2019 Sorry Charlie but I just never felt you to be good for Hermione in this story. Never felt any sort of tension or pull. I mean we were TOLD there was but I never SAW anything. If there's going to be a rival for Hermione I think Blaise has better chemistry with her. |
Cali Dreamweaver chapter 18 . 2/21/2019 Oh hahaha! I love this. The pacing is just right. Laughing so hard at Hermione's discovery. Oh girl, we knew that was happening ages ago and you only realised now? On a different note, I have suspicions of Samaya |
rikawera chapter 36 . 1/19/2019 I'm from Fiji and this was freaking amazing to read! Loved it. |
Bele chapter 36 . 12/25/2018 thank you for writing this story. |
K chapter 27 . 12/23/2018 Poor Draco! I feel his pain... |
Brokenbell chapter 36 . 11/29/2018 I loved this story! Thank you so much for writing it and sharing it with all of us! |
brokenbell chapter 21 . 11/28/2018 I am continuing to just adore this story and also continuing to suspect Narcissa. Also, Draco’s letter cracked me up as he wrote: “It's unbelievable to think that this might end so soon. I scarcely know how to feel.” Me Draco reading this in ePub format and seeing we are only on page 455 of 851: don’t get too attached to that dream... |
brokenbell chapter 12 . 11/27/2018 I am loving this story—you are such a good writer! Throwing out my guess that the blackmailer is Narcissa... |
V. Vichi L chapter 7 . 11/24/2018 i'm sorry but my review now will only consist of fangirling xD i'm really loving your version of Draco and other characters here. the characterizations seemed very logical and real, considering the after-war effects and everything else they had to endure to move on. i loved that you seemed to put so much thoughts on your story, and the meticulous considerations represent itself perfectly in your writing. the characters and descriptions were very matured and articulate. the dialogues between characters were very well-written that sometimes my heart just couldn't take it ;w; i liked how you didn't go and mercilessly turn Ron hot-headed and unreasonably opposing of Draco (but i haven't read his response on Draco and Hermione's pretend status; hopefully everything will be okay, iykwim). besides that, i also liked how you represented Pansy. well, overall, Ron and Pansy are mostly used as a weapon to inflict conflict between Draco and Hermione, regardless of them being OOC. so i'm thankful that it seemed that you didn't want either of them to come off as stupid, obsessive, one-dimensional characters. as for the plot, you gave us just enough details to keep wondering what would happen next. at first i was kind of looking forward to seeing more than fat descriptive paragraphs, but now it had my full interest. i couldn't skip right to the lighter ones, as every description seemed meaningful and important. well, then. i'm gonna go and read the next chapters now. i'll come back when i've reached the last page |
TheLastLynx chapter 10 . 11/11/2018 lmao at Gordon Ramsay being a squid xD |
Matsyakanya chapter 19 . 11/8/2018 It's really unfair, you know...to stop there, I mean... ;) |
Matsyakanya chapter 17 . 11/8/2018 WHAT...?! What happens next? Does he prove it?(winks winks!) |
LissaDream chapter 36 . 11/6/2018 This was beyond brilliant. Loved EVERY second of it! |
Guest chapter 36 . 11/6/2018 This is the Best fanfic I've ever read. The characters were so believable. First of all Dracos friendship with Harry and Ron was perfectly paced, H so relaxed and R just emotional enough to make it seem real but not the typical bashing, I'm so glad about that. Secondly Hermione, she was written great and strong but still with her heart like the Hermione I love. Then the plot, it was always interesting, but never over the top or unbelievable Thanks so much for writing this and sharing your talent. I'm going to check out your profile now and hope to find other stories! |