Reviews for Heavy Lies the Crown |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I just absolutely adore this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I have to admit, that little scene with Draco apologizing to Hermione surprised me. I knew, from the way he acted and the tone of the story that he's grown up from the immature, irresponsible kid from Hogwarts but actually taking the time out of his busy schedule to stop and apologize for all the wrong things he did to Hermione really shows his growth. It made me smile, too, when they talked about small things in the beginning, particularly when Hermione commented on the way Draco stirred his tea. His meeting with the Weasleys also showed more of his transformation, though in a subtler way. I was a bit perplexed as to why Ron was behaving so skittishly, but I suppose that's only to be expected. Ron, to me, seems like that type to hold onto a grudge, and after all the fireworks at Hogwarts, I would suspect he would have a grudge the size of Mt Everest against Draco. NOW I see why Draco's having so many financial issues. 100 0 galleons a month would certainly take quite a toll on his coffers... Has he tried searching out his blackmailer, hiring a detective or sorts, or anything? Hm... I'll have to think on who the blackmailer is before I say anything ;) Great chapter, once again! Best |
![]() ![]() ![]() brill chapter! i loved the meeting b/w draco and hermione where he apologises and all. that was super cute! xD and i LOVED the cliffhanger at the end; i mean talk about suspense. i guess that explains the steadily declining malfoy fortune aye! as for who the culprit is, i can't say i know this early on. i'll have to read a few more chaps before i get an idea! ;] anyways kudos to a fabulous chap xO |
![]() ![]() ![]() The beginning of this chapter felt very normal, well as normal as it could be, it being set in a fictional place lol But I liked how all the magic was intertwined with the normal life of a businessman, like going to the bank, sotting in a meeting. Not that I know what the life of a business man is like but whatever lol xD And just when Draco was taking a step in the right direction and was thinking about trusting Harry... still, I look forward to see Hermione's reaction (: I always really enjoy reading your Draco... I don't know there's just something so human about him (: As to the blackmailing, I think it could be Pansy, Theo, Daphne, Lucius. In fact to be honest I have absolutely no idea who it could be haha ;; TwilightFairy-x |
![]() ![]() ![]() Curiouser and curiouser... I don't know! If we broke it down into houses, I don't think it's anyone that was with him in Slytherin house almost everyone's whereabouts have been covered. I think that if Draco thinks Harry *might* know then it's more proable to be someone from Gryffindor... This is hard I really don't know... Percy? Totally wrong I'm sure. I need more information...are there clues in the story? Good chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was very reluctant to post any reviews here, but seeing as CG is still down. I think I still need read another two chapters and or read more letters from this anonymous character. From this one I cannot for the life of me guess who it might be. The Malfoy family has many enemies from both the good side and the bad side. You cannot rule out any good doers to not be included in that list. Looking forward to next weeks chapter. Liz |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! I can't wait til the next chapter! I always log into my email account hoping to see another alert for this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omgomg so good! I can't wait for the next installment. and, i have no clue who the blackmailer is.. ah! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHAT! Is his mommy having an affair or...? I WANNA KNOW! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love a good mystery and I think we have one that is really intriging so with that said I wll keep an eye on it... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think its someone close to him. And what kind of photos does the blackmailer have of Draco's mother? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so sorry, I just read this chapter RIGHT NOW. I like bitchy Pansy. And bitchy Ginny. Maybe because I despise Ginny and Pansy just seems like the type. Don't change her! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This seems to be once again a really nice story from you :) I especially loved the scene with quidditch. Hope you update soon :) |
![]() ![]() Some answers- only leading to more questions! Aah! But, who is it? Update soon and tell us more! x |
![]() ![]() ![]() whoever is doing that to him is a bastard...and i feel like i have probably already been introduced to them... update soon! |