Reviews for Heavy Lies the Crown
LunaNigra chapter 2 . 1/23/2009
I wonder if there's a snag to it...

Loved it!

Luna
margaritama chapter 2 . 1/23/2009
You are killing me with the art work which is so damn perfect. Actually, this story is PERFECT. I love that its from Draco's POV - it's refreshing, daring - a perfect continuation of the series without that horrid epilogue.

Ok, so I'm assuming the girl in the artwork is Pansy. Love how you paint her as desperate yet cunning. She wants and wants and wants but doesn't know how to give (a perfect antithesis of Hermione who gives of herself and that will just change Draco). A contrast to Draco who for the last 7 years has been giving all of him but he's not been on the receiving end. I could just picture his face throughout the entire dinner - holding back a sneer in disgust. Love Greg - remorseful and full of guilt for his friend and his actions. Theo I'm not too sure about - he's easily distracted and could want power. I see they all still see Draco as their leader and look to see how he behaves. I think attending that Quidditch match will be a huge statement and eye-opener. It's going to put Draco in a situation that I think he secretly desires: to be relaxed, among friends, no hidden agenda, no ploys.

You surprised with Lucius - I think he really could be a changed man. Still he knows how to play people and situations. Hopefully, he won't let himself be dragged into anything that could hurt his family.

Ok, I'm in pure anticipation of what Draco will think when he sees Hermione. I'm assuming he hasn't seen her in a long time. So he's not expecting a gorgeous looking, grown up Granger. I'm also assuming she's not married to Ron (thank goodness) and is still single. I can't wait. I adore your Draco: dark, brooding, domineering, sexy, and totally alpha while trying to function in a world that hates him but needs him. And he has to partly swallow some of that pride to do whats right for his family.

Please have the banner with Hermione include an image of her so we can see your two characters. And you should check out BreenieWeenie's trailer's over at YouTube - her work is fantastic and she should do a trailer for your story.
gitgit chapter 2 . 1/23/2009
o an interesting chapter indeed this story is getting interesting chapter by chapter man!

i cant wait to see how the quidditch game goes and aw poor greg!
SkySeven chapter 2 . 1/23/2009
Wow, super, super awesome.
A Kindred Soul chapter 1 . 1/22/2009
this is a really great story! i cannot wait until you update!
slytherinqueen23 chapter 1 . 1/20/2009
i like the story and am intrigued to read more. update soon!
RainGeist chapter 1 . 1/20/2009
Excellent! I love all of the mystery. Update soon!
GryffindorPrincess2233 chapter 1 . 1/20/2009
Great first chapter! I love this story so far. I wonder what Draco is worried about Lucius figuring out. I guess I will have to keep reading to find out. Excellent first chapter! 10/10
Nixie002 chapter 1 . 1/20/2009
O Very interesting so far. I'm rather curious about that box Harry had and what went on between Harry and Lucius. And Draco's secret! Haha Very mysterious indeed. Please update soon! ]
an0nym0use chapter 1 . 1/20/2009
you're back! i'm excited! this sounds so promising! can't wait for fridays! lotsa exclamation marks haha.
lilblueangel1223 chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
I'm so used to typing "update soon" along with my review. It's become a habit, ahah.

This sounds very interesting and very mystifing. I'm looking forward to reading more, especially about Hermione.

Expect another review for chapter two! (:
Delicious-Panda chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
Oh yay~! I'm so glad that you have a new story going! I've loved every story you have on FF and so I'm very excited for this~! I will look forward to fridays even more now.

I look forward to reading more!
brandonlov chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
I'm so glad you decided to continue writing. I've read your one shots, and of course, We Learned by the Sea, and just loved your work.

Great beginning, can't wait for more troubled Draco.
rachhulk chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
me likey! haha

it's so mysterious and poor draco saddled with so much. I can't wait to see how you'll bring hermione and draco together!
lilybells chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
this is great and i'm looking forward to it

i've read most of your one-shots

and i'll be reading we learned the sea soon

i'm surprised to see the M rating of this story, as from what i've seen you've never ventured further than T.

anyways thanks for the good reads, can't wait for the updates.
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