Reviews for Heavy Lies the Crown |
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![]() ![]() ![]() YAY for the description at the very beginning of the story about how they would get to Lucius. I don't see thought-out description like those in fanfiction at all (or hardly ever), and I'm very glad that you had put that bit of detail in there & the mechanics of it are also described beautifully. It's things like those that make me envision again the magical place Rowling set up for us. Draco's willingness to see his father again sparked my curiosity. I already like where this story is going :D! Excellent and very strong starting chapter -sque- I'm looking forward to reading more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a simply wonderful beginning! You have made me very curious what's in that box and most of all, what happened during the war. Your charcterization of Lucius is interesting and intense. The scene with the wedding rings was emotional and romantic, but not overdone. Great work! |
![]() ![]() Great start. I can't wait to read the rest of it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the beginning...and can't wait for Hermione to make her appearance. :D |