Reviews for Come Back
9TailedFox chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
Wow. Your good. I love fics that get inside character's heads. This was a great way to capture the moment. Glad you decided to write a Zoid Fic and hope you do more. Well, you may not like my fic because it branches out from everything Zoids, but I get in my character's heads a lot and it's good reading if you have an open mind to something new. Hope to see ya soon.

AmberAnodyne chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
Zoids is love.
Geist Getral chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
hi coco nee-chan ) Anything I can say just wouldn't be good enough. Its simply great for what so far has been written. Keep up the good work!
TeaC0sy chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
Not the biggest fan of Zoids, but this was a nice little fic. Bit short for you! X] But still nice.

I’m too young to see a war before me.

I’m too old to turn a blind eye to it. - Awesome lines :D. Anyway, really liked the emotion in here. *thumbsup*
ShadowRebirth37 chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
Wow. For a newcomer to the Zoids section, tis was fantastic! Take it from a Zoids vet, u did a great job on this! My first Zoids fic/one-shot, "Rebirthing", wasnt half as good as this! Even my newest one-shot, "Stars", isnt as good.

I write Raven & Shadow more than I do Van, Irvine or Moonbay, but you had them all in-character! Im impressed!

I hope you decide to stay in the Zoids section! This was a great fic! I hope to read more Zoids fics from u! ;P


(Btw, great job on the 1st person!)
randomcat23 chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
What a nice surprise I found this morning! It's been awhile since I've seen something that focuses on Van. Anyway, I think you captured his thoughts on Fiona and Zeke perfectly. Nice work!
pointytilly chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
Ah, a side to Van I wish they'd shown more onscreen—the uncertain one, who doesn't have ACTION going on to distract him from being caught up in a war...and the one who cares about his friends most of all, even in the quieter times.

I particularly liked "I'm too young to see a war before me. I'm too old to turn a blind eye to it."

(I didn't see any fact-y stuff off, though it's been a while since I've see that episode too.)