Wow. Your good. I love fics that get inside character's heads. This was a great way to capture the moment. Glad you decided to write a Zoid Fic and hope you do more. Well, you may not like my fic because it branches out from everything Zoids, but I get in my character's heads a lot and it's good reading if you have an open mind to something new. Hope to see ya soon.

9TailedFox.

Zoids is love.

hi coco nee-chan ) Anything I can say just wouldn't be good enough. Its simply great for what so far has been written. Keep up the good work!

Not the biggest fan of Zoids, but this was a nice little fic. Bit short for you! X] But still nice.

I’m too young to see a war before me.

I’m too old to turn a blind eye to it. - Awesome lines :D. Anyway, really liked the emotion in here. *thumbsup*

Wow. For a newcomer to the Zoids section, tis was fantastic! Take it from a Zoids vet, u did a great job on this! My first Zoids fic/one-shot, "Rebirthing", wasnt half as good as this! Even my newest one-shot, "Stars", isnt as good.

I write Raven & Shadow more than I do Van, Irvine or Moonbay, but you had them all in-character! Im impressed!

I hope you decide to stay in the Zoids section! This was a great fic! I hope to read more Zoids fics from u! ;P

~Ibeyla

(Btw, great job on the 1st person!)

What a nice surprise I found this morning! It's been awhile since I've seen something that focuses on Van. Anyway, I think you captured his thoughts on Fiona and Zeke perfectly. Nice work!

Ah, a side to Van I wish they'd shown more onscreen—the uncertain one, who doesn't have ACTION going on to distract him from being caught up in a war...and the one who cares about his friends most of all, even in the quieter times.

I particularly liked "I'm too young to see a war before me. I'm too old to turn a blind eye to it."

(I didn't see any fact-y stuff off, though it's been a while since I've see that episode too.)