Reviews for Nine to Five
WiNkY CuLLeN chapter 32 . 5/26/2010
hi! I love this fanfic. I started reading it yesterday but in spanish. I can say that the translation Troyis is doing is quite loyal to the original. Spanish version is up to chapter 31 so I'm here :)
goshdarnypooh chapter 34 . 5/26/2010
I am putting your story on alert in the hopes that one day you will get the chance to update again :-)
jovipattinson chapter 34 . 5/4/2010
hey I am to El Salvador, i love you fic, is the best, please continue, I hopo you are good, no speak english sorry, you care full
walker123 chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
OH MY GOD, I so wanna be standing in her place when he came out the bathroom. It was a great opening to the story and hoping it gets better from there. Also wouldn't mind a bit more of Edward in a towel.
moonfrog274 chapter 34 . 4/19/2010
are you going to finish this story? hope so...
Thunderboy28 chapter 34 . 4/10/2010
I like the story good job
DimitrixChristianxAdrianH-O-T chapter 27 . 3/24/2010
pls pls pls pls pls tell me they don't lose renesmee!
DimitrixChristianxAdrianH-O-T chapter 2 . 3/23/2010
y can't rosalie be nice?
TheNewVampInTown chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
good start so far...You made a few errors so far I'll just point them out to help you

1- color colour

2- billion air billioanire

3- also when you say trader I think you meant traitor.

Other that that it was great, enjoyed when he came out looking a his glory with his devilish hair lol.
Kristin Michelle A chapter 34 . 3/21/2010
Okay I started to read this story. I loved it. But why why WHY didn't u finish it? Please finish it. It's really intneresting. And I finished it TWO freakin nights! Please don't neglect to finish writing the story. It's to good to be left alone. Imao.

twilightluver11 chapter 34 . 3/19/2010
It's been like 7 months. When are you going to update?
bliitz chapter 34 . 2/11/2010
i liked it :)
robyntwilight16 chapter 2 . 2/11/2010
Hm, I'm interested,I think this food be good...
blackagurl chapter 34 . 2/8/2010
i hope all works out with you but update soon
hyacinthgirl18 chapter 2 . 2/3/2010
I like the premise of your story, I really do. And I would love to read it, but I'm having a hard time getting past the grammatical/spelling mistakes. Sorry, I hope I'm not coming off as harsh or anything, I'm just a huge pain-in-the-ass grammar nazi. I really think your story would be great if I could read further, but I've realized I'm mostly freaking out on your mistakes rather than actually taking your story in. I don't want to make you uncomfortable or anything, but maybe you should find a beta to edit before you post. Sorry for bugging you, blame the editor in me. Hopefully I didn't hurt your feelings or anything...
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