Reviews for Breaking
the-living-zombie chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
OMG! this story is amazing

its so sad im still crying now!
emilydear chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
This story was absolutely beautiful.

It brought tears to my eyes. :)

Great story :D
askjhklj chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
one word: beautiful.

1. your writing is beast.


3. i'll help with the research about the denali vamps.

4. animal crossing love. i have city folk too!

5. i hope your sister feels better soon. (:

6. and please finish Eat You Alive. :D
l'heure bleue chapter 1 . 2/10/2009
I just ... I ... um ... well, to be honest, I just don't have words for this. _ It was BEAUTIFUL! I loved it so ... so much. I love everything you write, and this was no exception. _ It's sad that Bella moved on, but not at the same time. If Edward had never come back, I would have wanted her to go to Jake and be happy. So ... yeah. ANYWAY!


That was for you, and your little sister. I hope whatever is going on isn't serious, and I hope that your little sister gets out of the hospital soon! _



ababababa chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
oh wow. i liked the twist at the end. who is the guy? i hope you wrote a follow up to this and if you havent you should!
ticklelishness chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
OH MY...

that was so effing beautiful

did edward turn human? i dont even know

but that was amzazingg

im speachless
EverlyYours chapter 1 . 2/5/2009
WAIT SO HE'S HUMAN? aww man that made me cry. Beautiful, beautiful writing.
DarknessmetLight chapter 1 . 2/3/2009

Just wow.
Isolda.luna chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
Xxchoco-bananasxX chapter 1 . 1/30/2009
oh my gosh...

oh my gosh...

i think...that was...beautiful

(sobs) Brilliant.
Siobhan chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
Oh my, I have read all of your oneshots, and this one, by far, has captured me entirely! What amazing insight on an alternative outlook! An amazing story for sure! I would definitely read this one on and on lol. Written with amazing preciseness and kept me guessing the whole time! For a moment, I was thinking of that blasted fountain in Volterra HA!

Amazing writing, if you consider taking it further than a oneshot, let your faithful readers in on the action!
spicehnoodles chapter 1 . 1/25/2009

This story is so sad it made me cry! I love the way you... I just love it!
fantasyluv chapter 1 . 1/25/2009

i know you know what im going to ask

but ill ask it anyway

was that him?

and if so how was he human and why didnt he remember and how did he just happen to be where Bella was and what will happen next?

inquiring minds want to know

please please please im begging you to write back

on the edge of insanity due to anticipation,

ElizabethlovesEdward chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
Omg im crying!

frequentlydazzeledbylit chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
okay so let me see if i ge this straight,

1. edward kills himself

2. jacob and bella are not together? or are for a short peroid of time

3. he goes back to her

4. he goes to italy just like New Moon

5. i dont get the ending... butt is it him?

6. great job! loved it :)
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