Reviews for The Last of the Red Hot Swamis
Kagetora no Tsume chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
Precious babies, I love them both. X3 Great job!
elf maiden cyd chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
This is REALLY good. You should definetly add more chapters to it. This story caught (and totally held) my attention. If you don't write more to this, write more in general! :)
Lasgalendil chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
I liked hearing about Schmendrick's childhood and his ever changing relationship with magic. Your explanation of his parentage and upbringing helps explain his lack of trust and unwillingness to reach out.

Your Molly was believable, rough around the edges but still kind-hearted deep in the inside. I had forgotten that Schmendrick was so much older than her but looked still like a younger man. You captured the awkwardness of their relationship very nicely!

As far as constructive criticism I would like to see you re-read this piece and do a little shop work. There were several grammatical errors and sentences that didn't make much sense, and they detract from the story.

Good work!