Reviews for A New Start
delete-account-please 5237847 chapter 4 . 9/3/2014
hope you will update soon.
delete-account-please 5237847 chapter 3 . 9/3/2014
What a fantastic chapter can’t wait to see more so please update soon.
delete-account-please 5237847 chapter 2 . 9/3/2014
What a fantastic chapter really liked it.
delete-account-please 5237847 chapter 1 . 9/3/2014
What a fantastic chapter.
delete-account-please 5149757 chapter 4 . 8/23/2014
Hope you find it in yourself to update again.
delete-account-please 5149757 chapter 3 . 8/23/2014
I really liked this marvelous chapter so please update more marvelous chapters soon.
delete-account-please 5149757 chapter 2 . 8/23/2014
I can’t believe how marvelous this chapter was.
delete-account-please 5149757 chapter 1 . 8/23/2014
Really liked this marvelous chapter.
delete-account-please 4171342 chapter 4 . 7/20/2014
hope you will update soon.
delete-account-please 4171342 chapter 3 . 7/20/2014
Really liked this stunning chapter.
delete-account-please 4171342 chapter 2 . 7/20/2014
Really stunning chapter really liked it.
delete-account-please 4171342 chapter 1 . 7/20/2014
Really stunning chapter liked it.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/2/2014
i was so hopeful for this fic as i've not been able to find many under this pairing, however i was simply disappointed. The bad dialogue i could sort of handle, but the mislabelling of characters is unacceptable, i say mislabelling because the two you have described as Harry Potter and Draco Malfoy bear no similarities to the original creations of J.K Rowling.
Perhaps one way to salvage this fic would be to simply change their names and label it a simple twilight fic with some OMC characters.
Please note this is constructive criticism and i bear no will to 'flame' you, twisting existing characters into your own fictions is fine, but warping them out of all recognisability except for their name is wrong, and indeed rude to the original writer.
ShadowThief126 chapter 4 . 6/24/2014
So by now I am guessing the story will not continue. Too bad that would have been interesting.
cullenpotterlover84 chapter 4 . 11/29/2013
are you willing to adopt the story out? If so I would like to look into it.
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