|Reviews for This Private Moment|
| 4xtc chapter 1 . 10/15/2009
Took a brief moment for the penny to drop that all four times happen on the first day A & J meet. Good one!
Loved time #3 with 'The Scream'.
| JanetL chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
That was so beautiful. I think many books could be written about Jasper and Alice.
| ybee chapter 1 . 9/4/2009
(sigh) Well that was just beautiful )
I'm very excited to read your other stories now!
| Patastic chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
Wow. Just wow. That was wonderful.
| Frust-sheep chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
Aww, this was awesome. I can not believe that I did not read this before. Oh shame on me. Anyway I added it to my fav list, too. :) So good that I looked at your profile again to see the necklace and the book from your other perfect story. ;)
| Alice Hale Brandon chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
aw poor jazz :(
| jordan-michelle chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
i fell in love with this :)
| Rosetapestry chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
| Sail Away Mayday chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
Lovely, lovely, lovely. You write Alice/Jasper so well. Kudos to you.
| behindabruise chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
I love Alice/Jasper. No more than i love Bella/Edward, Rosalie/Emmett, Carlisle/Esme, or James/Victoria (all five are loved equally!), but this was adorable, and i love AxJ fics and OneShots, so this was a culmination of awesome for me:)
By the way, i love your style of writing;) Very sensory and emotional!
| diehardtwilightfan23 chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
| twilightbloom chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
In the immortal words of the wonderful Jackson Rathbone (deep sigh with hand over heart), this story is "purty swet!"
And I love it!
| MiNa.x0x chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
heyy this one shot is really good, the way you describe it is very deep and exactly how alice and jasper are... hope you write more great stories!
| panevil chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
another human moment...god girl you are good... I just finished my chapter of "tie me down" and went to read your other works, because I'm still locked in my room with this stupid broken shoulder and I so enjoyed your other story... and of course you made me cry again. You are so talented. Well, will be waiting patiently for next installment of tied.
| A Fan of Your Work chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
So sweet. I love it. Great job.
(P.S. - I like the way you wrote Jasper's dialogue, with "in'" instead of "ing". He IS a Southerner, after all. ])