|Reviews for Sniveling?|
| excessivelyperky chapter 1 . 5/24
Well, of course he Obliviated James. From all he knew, James would simply use this information to hurt and humiliate him even more, after laughing about the encounter with his friends and possibly Lily.
Oh, yes, James would swear not to tell anyone-but he would tell Sirius, who would laugh, Peter would overhear and store it up for later, and Remus would look Sad and not do anything.
And then Snape would have the whole thing come out against him in the Great Hall. No, Snape did the right thing.
| DarySnape chapter 1 . 4/24
Me gusto, creo que escribes muy bien :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2014
I never would have guessed that was your first fanfic; I absolutely loved it! Additionally, I felt that both of the characters stayed really true to canon, which ended up making me feel really bad for Severus. I would love to see what would happen if James ever remembered the conversation (maybe if the obliviate was mid-cast because of how emotionally distraught Severus was). Of course, that would probably make it com
| Joey Danny Ketail chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
That is soooo sad! I can't stop crying! This is the saddest fanfiction ever! Thank you so much for making this! Poor Snape...
| MuggleCreator chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
Damn. Of course, Obliviate is perfect for that...
| Petrichor-3 chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
I likes it alot! Just wanted to say that! :)
| Hi chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
Yor right I DID want to. That had tear in my eyes and a part of me hated the world at the moment. How could people be so cruel?
| PinkMusicalCherry chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Ahh so good! Didn't want him to obliviate James though :(
| Luvandia chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
Congratulations, you are the first person who has made me cry over the internet. Dear God, I want to hug Snape so badly.
Keep writing, you have the greatest ability to put emotions into words so effectively that it made a woman, bearing the attitude of Filch, have a single tear roll down her face. Your talents in this area may have even surpassed J.K. Rowling.
| ShadowedPlague chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
I absolutely SWEAR on all things SYNYSTER THAT HE DOESN'T DESERVE HALF OF THE SHIT THAT IS DISHED OUT TO HIM! SO MANY FUCKING PEOPLE HATE HIM AND THE ONLY THING HE DID WAS EXIST!
| Paraplueschi chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
Aww, no Snape, don't obliviate him! D:
I really liked this short story. Well written, and the characters stayed true to their character over all. Very good for a first!
| HideTheDecay chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
Wow. I really want there to be more. I'd give you a really lengthy review, but I'm rather tired. Instead, I'll just say that I really enjoyed it and regret that it will not continue. The ending was brilliant regardless.
| TequilaNervous chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
Hi! I like this storu very much! Too bad Severus obliviated James in the end...but well...maybe this is the way is supposed to be. You are the author after all. I really like this one.
| BLAHBLAHBLAH92831 chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
Agh, I LOVE stories about sev's past. You fit the canon well, and the story's nice and angsty, but without being over dramatic or 'whiny'.
Great job broski!
| xDarklightx chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
I like the story.