Reviews for The First Time
Laurisa chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
Wow that was really... powerfull? I think thats the word I'm looking for. This is really well done, and I dunno how to explain it otherwise. :) I dunno if I'm sad or angry or what but I seem to be frowning. Maybe it's cause this is so emotional?

Well anyway, good job!

xxxx :)
Knight Watcher chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
Captures the essence of the game mechanics regarding the dagger's powers. Well done... couldn't have put it better myself though I have yet to finish the game though its like near the end after Farah takes the dagger away from the Prince.
Nocturnal-Dayz chapter 1 . 2/14/2009
Awesome. The way you tell the Prince's thoughts about death in this story is nothing short of that. I love the dark tone and how you switch between the different thoughts every line; somehow that makes the story more powerful and emotional to me, the last six lines especially.

Again, awesome job.