Reviews for Bloodline Part 2 of The Jutsu of Love
Ruler of the elements chapter 7 . 2/11
"Naruto obliviously likes to live dangerously." Huh? Don't you mean obviously likes to live dangerously?
I don't usually mind typo's like this, but this particular one kinda struck me as funny for some reason. Maybe I'm just weird. BUT! I'm still enjoying rereading this stuff, just thought I'd point that particular typo out, don't know why. Anyway, ONWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER! YOSH!
(Dang it, I keep channeling Gai and Lee. *slaps self in the face multiple times* Bad me! Bad! Stop it!)
Heavencarson2525 chapter 44 . 12/2/2017
You amazing wright and I love your story I hope to read more of your stuff.
jenuzumaki chapter 2 . 11/13/2017
Iruka and Tsunade were over the top with their parent roles. They were treating him like a 10 year old boy. Tsunade became irresponsible as Hokage, she should have trusted Jiraiya to be able to protect Naruto from enemies. And they should remember that Jiraiya originally wanted to take him away for like a couple of years not six months. Naruto didn’t want to leave that was why they agreed to just be gone for six months or until he could finish the training. But he also mentioned I think that if it would take longer than a year he might even ask Hinata to join them.

I really missed how Naruto called Tsunade Bachan. I think that’s why I hate it when he calls her Mama and her calling him ‘baby’. Honestly, I cringe when reading those parts. Iruka was also treating him like a little boy, maybe it was just me or something. I have 2 boys so I can’t help but compare my husband with Iruka, lol. My husband would kiss my kids like how Iruka was with Naruto. But my boys are 7 & 5. But I’m sure once they hit puberty it would stop or maybe less touchy or showy.

Hinata, well I felt so bad for her, waiting for his man and worrying so much. Naruto should have really sent a message that he needed to take longer time to finish his training. It was a mistake on his part, whatever he was thinking, still should notify them at home. And if I were Hinata I would always be jealous. Because she had to share his man all the time with so many people, her time with him was less and most of the time his parents or other people interrupt them. So kudos to Hinata, always patient and faithful to his Naruto.

I love the reunion, by the way, especially the Kakashi part hehe. I think out of all them, the one who should have adopted him was either Kakashi or Jiraiya, his godfather. And Naruto had a lot more to thank Hinata for, coz everything started with Hinata when she asked Naruto to train with her. If Hinata never had the courage then he wouldn’t get a girlfriend. After they became a couple, that was when they all started to treat him like family.
AnonnymA chapter 50 . 7/17/2017
DAT ENDING, THO! Oh man. I knew it was gonna happen.. I was trembling as it happened... and my mind is still blown after it happened! Good job my friend!
ChimamireNoBara22 chapter 50 . 12/1/2016
Story is absolutely amazing! The only criticism I could give that the constant need of reassurance gets a little annoying. But that is a very minor flaw, everything else is pure genius! :D
johnathan C2 chapter 6 . 7/2/2016
Ikinmko
MADDOG789 chapter 35 . 7/1/2016
Another page I love to read again, again, again, again and again and hay if it is not lat I wood lik to wish you a very happy birthday
MADDOG789 chapter 32 . 6/29/2016
Hhhhh I have lost track of how many times I have read this chapters but still love it and can not help but say MYDICK MYBALLS MYDICK
send2sachin8 chapter 6 . 6/12/2016
Man... she saw the yondaime in naruto. Awesome writing..!
brutusjr chapter 32 . 5/7/2016
Extremely well done...
It's about time those two had a moment of nothing but happiness.
IchBinButter chapter 23 . 4/21/2016
OMG. Bloody but good.
MADDOG789 chapter 50 . 3/8/2016
Even better than the first one you published love even more if you were a good friend of mine I wood give you a big fat wet kiss on the mouth right now for such a awesome story on naruto & hinata and HAPPY BIRTHDAY and i am so sorry about you losing someone
g.o.d chapter 50 . 1/2/2016
In part 1 Saskura and Sauke obviously were in love with each other and now you pull this shit. Oh, I know, you're jealous because SS is a better ship than retarded NH. Go kill yourself, fucking loser.
Guest chapter 19 . 1/2/2016
la morte di orochimaru e 1 spettacolo
Starfire99 chapter 28 . 8/15/2015
Something is confusing me here. Why is Naruto throwing such a fit over Koharu and Homura being killed by Tsunade and Jiraiya when Naruto told them last chapter that they could do whatever they wanted with the council. He really has no right to be pissed over them killing Koharu and Homura after telling them that.
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