Even though you didn't have it all planned out, you were able to keep track of the story very well (even if you might have lost it along the way) and bring it to a close. You didn't prolong it for the sake of prolonging, it expanded organically; you made a believable story with depth and a satisfying open end. Thank you for sharing your story!

Man... This story had me crying pretty much every chapter. Good job. And thank you very much for the epilogue. It gives us needed closure.

Now I'm going to go rehydrate myself. Guh.

I love this fic so much, even if it hurts... and it hurts to see Harry SO broken.

I didn’t cry, nope, totally am not crying.

love the story! if supernatural ate your brain then it ate my life...lol I have a lot of supernatural memorabilia.

I've just finished this and came back to chapter 1 just to ask what's with the preface?

this is the best story that i have read in ages, thank you so much for making it

Good story hope you will write again some day

Yes, we do read, and I must say that Supernatural are my brain is just so much better than the cat are my laptop

NO JUST FUCKING NO, not even bothered it is a slash the fact a shitty vampire can easily read the mind of a wizard with a little fucking push, just stop fucking writing

The Harry of this story is so fucked up, for all the things that had to pass poor and also lost so many people. I always believed that the love that Sirius had for Harry was the truest and most beautiful of the whole saga. Great story!

Lol you can practically hear harry mentally snarling "sorry Bella not this guy he's mine!"

Very original. Only wish Harry and Jacob would hav become best friends. Oh! And luv the part about how Harry got his name

This was beautifully written, even if I did spend several hours as an emotional wreck.

This was a fascinating alternative explanation to Harry's immortality, whereas most fics like this simply use his status as Master of Death to accomplish it. Kudos on originality!