|Reviews for Gotta Be Somebody|
| Astrido chapter 11 . 5/2
Fantastic story and really good writing. I love the idea that they don't become best friends immediately.
Though, despite your edits there's a lot of missing words all over.
And if you did some edits last year does that mean you will gk on with this story? If not, could you post a short summary of the intended plot and ending, please?
| inuyasha16451 chapter 11 . 12/23/2020
Omg. Please please come back and update this awesome story soon
| baby-kitsune9 chapter 8 . 5/18/2020
are you ever going to update or finish this story? it's...shockingly good.
| YuunaFiction chapter 8 . 2/26/2020
I’m on the fence with this fic. I’m enjoying it so far, and really liking Harry’s and Jaspers interactions. However, I’m beginning to get increasingly irritated (angry?) at Edward. Harry is making it blatantly clear that he wants nothing to do with Edward, but he’s like a fucking leech (pun not intended). The confrontation in the hallway made me want to kick Edwards teeth in. On the same note, I don’t get why Jasper isn’t doing anything to stop Edward. If he’s so convinced Harry is the same as him - a soldier, then why the hell would he let Edward get up in Harry’s face like that? Pushing a wounded soldier into a corner is a freaking death sentence. Edward isn’t taking Harry seriously at all - none of them are.
Frankly, I want Harry to crush Edwards face in or something. As of right now, there is nothing appealing with the apparent leaning of a Harry and Edward pairing in this fic. They are extremely toxic to one another. Edward can’t relate to Harry and he’s also incredibly immature for his age. Not to mention, he doesn’t respect Harry at all. Edward comes across as selfish and inconsiderate as hell.
| Vega-Pandora chapter 6 . 10/27/2019
Us Brits tend to swear more (as in say bitch, shit, fuck, cunt- you get my point). I feel as though 'bloody' is a stereotype that most people think we say when in reality, we don't (and if we do it's only usually people that either don't like swearing or are slightly younger and would get scolded for saying the nastier words). We tend to have a kind of 'asshole/sarcastic' sense of humour. Good book though!
| Kuroe17 chapter 11 . 3/16/2019
Will there be a continuation please ?
| Ainah Mangata chapter 1 . 8/24/2018
Is this discontinued? I mean it has been 7 years since the author updated.
| Guest chapter 11 . 7/13/2018
Hi! As a British person here I thought I’d help with common swear words!
Shite (past tense of shit)
Clusterfuck (refers to a bad situation)
Don’t know if anyone’s said these yet, hope there usefull!
Ps. Love the story
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/2/2018
Shits boring. Seriously making magic like that? I'm not a masochist to continue reading your so called story. Cya.
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/11/2018
Urgh. Another Harry is a poor ptsd boi. Ffs.
| The universe of imagination chapter 11 . 4/8/2018
Poor Harry. You makes me cry. :"( Update soon
| redbaron297 chapter 9 . 3/25/2018
let me guess, the king piece is the locator? where's the friendship side of this fic? all this is being borderline yaoi.
| shadows-haunt-angels chapter 11 . 3/1/2018
Really enjoyed this, hope to eventually read more!
| Tommy14 chapter 11 . 7/10/2017
Just wanted to say how much I enjoyed reading this fic and watching the developing friendship and understanding between the two soldiers, Harry and Jasper. Thank you for sharing.
| Guest chapter 8 . 6/24/2017
Too much AU