|Reviews for The Unwinding Of Percy Weasley|
| MrsCloWeasly chapter 27 . 2/24
I reaaaaaaaaaaaaaaallly love your Percy!
Is sad that a lot of people picture him as a bad person...he made a mistake but he comeback...people give him a chance!
It was funny to read about how the brothers talk and have fun!
Congratulations for this story...
Saludos desde Colombia!
| Guest chapter 26 . 1/21
I love this story! I really like how you wrote Percy. Personally, I've always thought he might have relaxed a bit after the war, but he wouldn't have had a complete personality change. He still would've loved his work, he still wouldn't have much of a sense of humour and he still would've been a bit pompous, and how you wrote Percy in this sounds like how I would write Percy. I like how you wrote Audrey, too. I've always seen her as the opposite of Percy- carefree, a sense of humour, devoted to her family- and that she'd bring out a side of him that no one thought existed- where he could laugh, and joke, and stopped acting like he had a broomstick shoved up his ass. I loved how Percy and Audrey understood each other, because they've both deserted their families before and neither of them are proud of that, so they know how each other feels. I found Audrey's story so sad. I've started reading the Uniting of Percy and Audrey Weasley, and *SPOILER ALERT* I found their father's death sad, too, but I could understand why David and Ama would be relieved- it was a horrible way to live, and at least he was with their mother now. I'm pretty fussy when it comes to fanfictions, and I like them to be best-selling novel standard, because I'm a huge bookworm. Though there are some minor issues with spelling, you are a talented writer, and you are one of the few authors I've found on fanfiction so far who I feel could actually write a novel and make money out if them. Keep up the good work!
| EchoedShadows chapter 27 . 11/27/2013
Wonderfully done! I've never managed to enjoy a story based on Percy before and I think you did an amazing job with his character while keeping the story fresh and interesting.
| Kelly Parker chapter 16 . 11/3/2013
I'm really enjoying your story, but two comments: Audrey's statement that she wasn't wearing any pants-the English term for underwear-so she was wearing a t-shirt and nothing else? The other is that you need to find someone to proof your grammar and spelling-you're not bad, but occasionally it is very distracting to have to interpret a sentence with mixed spelling and contractions.
I'm thinking Audrey looks like Mandy Moore, maybe?
| Hannah chapter 23 . 7/28/2013
Okay A) the cute. I drowned.
B) Oh dear. I feel really sorry for the Captain. I mean, what kind of experience must he have had with bees?
| Guest chapter 23 . 5/22/2013
are you a proffesional writer? i love this fanfiction so much, your writing is so beautiful! :D
| Sesquipedalia chapter 11 . 4/2/2013
Oh, Audrey, why?
Every writer should have that one friend willing to read through our writing and tell us what's wrong with it.
| Sesquipedalia chapter 8 . 4/1/2013
Reading this chapter, I died from laughter, came back from the dead, and then died laughing again. Greetings from the Underworld, Fred says hi!
| Sesquipedalia chapter 3 . 4/1/2013
The conversation with the ducks had me laughing for a good five minutes.
| mspstar97 chapter 27 . 3/17/2013
This was brilliant! Sorry I can't say more, but I really must be going to bed. Great job!
| unspeakable49 chapter 27 . 3/10/2013
This was absolutely perfect. The characters were well-portrayed, the plot was extremely well-thought out and developed to the tiniest of details, and most importantly everything was realistic. I loved your Percy, and although you did use the cliche personality everyone seems to have given Audrey, it worked out brilliantly. You gave her a whole new level of depth and made her seem incredibly original and unique.
| Mikki Kimani chapter 12 . 1/29/2013
I'm guessing you're a Bones fan!
| Anne Fatalism Dilettante chapter 26 . 11/26/2012
Dear Audrey who wrote a story about a fantastic Audrey,
You have done so well in this story that I just want to reach over the computer screen and give you a nice high five or something. The entire 26 chapters was brilliantly written! One thing I've noticed is that your descriptions are amazing - and your portrayal of the characters, especially Percy, is spot on. He must have been one of the most difficult characters to write, especially if it is from his perspective - since he has done his family a lot of wrong in the past after all. Yet you managed to tie things up so nicely, even showing how he has developed after meeting Audrey. I want to say how this is awesome, how you are awesome, how all the chapters were awesome.
Despite some constant misspelling (quiet - quite?) on some words and some tense errors, the plot totally had me sucked in and refused to just let me out. It was brilliant. I love how you wrote about Audrey - her quirks are wonderful, and everything was absolutely believable. One of the best portrayals about her I've ever seen, and it came from you! I like how you tied in the past of their Hogwarts days to the present - adding Fleur, those-ex-boyfriends-who-were-jerks, and Arthur in was also a great decision, seeing as how they made the story well-balanced and not just solely focused on them. Have I mentioned how humorous Audrey's landlady is as well? Brilliant, absolutely brilliant!
I can continue singing praises about this story forever. I came into the HP fandom looking for a good story on Percy since I felt that he was underappreciated, and found yours. I found this while searching on Google, incidentally, so you should feel proud that your story appeared quite at the top of the search.
Congratulations on a fantastic job!
| Noonie chapter 26 . 11/13/2012
Awwwwww I always fond Percy to be such a git, I'm glad to read a story where he stays true to character while still growing up and maturing into a decent human being :) Thanks for writing.
| outcarnate chapter 26 . 8/12/2012
I loved this story a lot, and you've breathed life into a character we are given nothing to build upon. That is truly story was intelligent, adorable, sweet, poignantly written, and altogether beautiful. This just made my day! Keep up the great work! :D