|Reviews for After Our Story|
| AngelOfFluffiness chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Ahh, so relaxing for me and cute! Yay!
| hgamer chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
i suggest moving this to the mana khemia section of .
| EisenHaruki chapter 1 . 1/6/2010
I love VaynexJess pairing. Sadly, you put this story on wrong forum ;(
| Laryna6 chapter 1 . 10/13/2009
Pretty good for a non-native speaker. What stood out were some punctuation issues. You end sentences with one period, not two: three periods is an elipsis, used to indicate something left unsaid, but there's no situation where two periods are used, or two commas in a row. And you need spaces after commas.
There's now a section for Mana Khemia fanfiction - if you moved this there that might help people find it. There isn't that much Vayne/Jess out there, which is a shame.
| lily100 chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
nice jessxvayne there. is it continue or not? i wanna know wht happened to nikki and roxis after jess' ending