Reviews for The Two Miscreants
AlucardAndHisWolfs chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
Wow, very creative!
Mug of Doodles chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
So adorable and optimistic. :D

They get kicked out but dont give a damn...cuz theres MORE chaos to be created. :D
TamaliaDuckiiLilMizRaynCloud chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
lol omg i totally forgot to review this sorry, anyway i loved it and i could see that happening, i dont mind that it was off in some areas though, it was still good and gave me a laugh
Annon chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
Amusement achieved!
Preemtive Karma chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
I found this really funny!
Erratta chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
Cute! I have no knowledge of the fandom, but cute! :D

Your meter's off a little in some places, but I'm going to assume you meant to do that. Sadly, your rhymes are off too, which detracts from the story. You've got:

Stanza 1: abcc

Stanza 2: aabb

Stanza 3: abcd

Stanzas 4-6: abcb

Did you mean to do that too? Just asking because it's a lot easier to read rhyming poems when the stanzas have the same pattern…

~Esme